Edward Hur

Edward Hur
Sept. 30th
ESL Writing

On Saturday

Every Saturday, it is the great day. First I don’t need to go to school. Also on Friday I can go to bed lately. That’s very fun because I can play computer game with friends. For example, last Friday, I played “Warcraft” with Jay who is my roommate. So I played computer game until two o’clock. Second I can go Wal-mart and Taco shop anytime because I have lots of free time. Third I don’t need to do my homework because after Saturday, Sunday will come through. For example, I had lots of homework last week. However I had two days for free so I finished half of my homework and then I finished half on Sunday. Finally I got good grade on my homework.

Hisae

Saturday is my favorite day

First, I usually sleep late in the morning. After I lately get up in my bed, I put on make up on my face. Second, I and my husband cook for lunch, or we go to restraint. I like them the same because cooking is very fun with my husband, so I'm fun in the restraint which is different from my apartment. Third, we sometimes go to park to walk around,also I often go to bookstore to read books, and go to mall to see clothes. Then, we often drive to find for garage sell because we can buy to want them. I like garage sell which is interesting. Finally, we meet friends who are very kind to me. I'm always glad to meet them. In my conclusion, I'm relaxed in my room. I sometimes watch moves. I have terrific day.

My favourite Saturday

As well know,the most students are get up late on Saturday,me too.On Saturday day, I usually take shower first,when I go back to my room, I can check my E-mail. second,I'm going to have lunch,because I get up too late.Third ,I need to sleep for evening.Finally, when I wake up,I always play basketball with other students.In my conclusion,I can play computer games with friends,after that,I go to sleep.

alan: my favorite day

My favorite day
Saturday is my faoriten day.I always get upat 1:00 p.m,becaues Ialways feel tired.When I get up.Frist,I brush my teeth and wsah my fish.Second I surf the internate,talk with my family and my chines friend.Sometimes,I play some games.Afternoon,I have dinner.Then I always play baskerball with anther people for about two hours.When I feel tired,I go tomy bedroom,drink some water and change clothes.Then I take a shower.Fourth,I watch some movie.Last,when the movie is end,I go to bed.

Saturday

Lydia jung
29-09-09
I like sturday

I like saturday most in the week. Because ,First I don't need to wake up early in the morning, so I can go to bed late in friday night and I can wake up when I want to wake up.
Secondly, I can play all day. After saturday is sunday so I can do my homeworks in sunday and I can sleep late again, Also I can chat with family or freinds on computer longtime.
Finally, I don't have study hall in saturday evening. So I can go to park and exersizing with my freinds.Also I can play more time.
In my conclusion, in saturday I can do what am I want to do and I don't need to do something what am I don't want to do. So I like saturday.

Venus

Venus
09/29/09
Wring2A

Saturday is my favorite day
First, I can sleeping long time in the home because I don’t need worry about my homework, I can do homework and study for afternoon. Second, I can with my mom go to shopping in the free time. We feel fun in this day. Third, on Saturday evening, I with my parents watch the TV. It is interesting for us. Sometimes my mom cooks rice and vegetable and meat for today’s dinner. Finally, I can use computer long time. Because It is weekend, my brother have time to chatting with me. In my conclusion, I can go to somewhere I like such as park, I can play the swim or I can go to library study and read many books. Saturday is my favorite day and rest day.

kevin

writting2A

kevin Tseng

9/29/09

My Saturday

Saturday is my favorite day. First, I wake up at eleven o'clock and chat with my friends. Second, I go to shopping and watch the movies in the afternoon. Third, I sometimes eat out and continue to play out with my friends until night. Finally, I go home and eat some snacks llike instant noodle, chip, and bread before I go to bed. In my conclusion, I think because of the Saturday, my life is colorful and wonderful.

Edward Hur

Edward Hur
September 27, 2009
ESL Writing

Her name is David. She lives in Korea. She is 40 years old. She is 165 centimeters. Her favorite food is Mc.Donald hamburger. She has drive Bentz. She works in company. Her husband name is Raymundo. Her family number is only 3. She is Mr.Nakagawa’s best friend. She likes Red color. She likes jacket. She has only 1 car. Her hair color is Brown. Her hobby is listening Korean music. She’s the best important person is Kevin. Her city people only 2 thousand. She loves Raymundo.

I play pool

David Lin
09/22/09
Writing 2A
I play pool
I had so many happy things in last Sunday because I was happy. For example: my uncle and I went to play pool in pool hall on last Sunday from 2:00 to 4:00pm. We thought the America pool was easy, so we played this for only in first hour. Then we just played different kinds of pool in Chinese way in second hour. My uncle won so many times in the pool games because he was very strong. It was fun, and I enjoyed.

Edward Hur

Edward Hur
September 16, 2009
ESL Writing

First, he goes back to china garden at 3p.m. with his parents by horses because he is very hungry. Second, he and his friend Maxwell cook many Chinese foods at 4p.m. because they haven’t enough money to pay Chinese food. Third, he, Maxwell, and David’s parents eats food what they made, but it taste terrible. Last, after dinner their parents hit David and Maxwell because of terrible taste.

alan

Frist,he cooks some chinken at 4pm,with his sister because hen want to eat some food tonight,because he is very hugry.sancend,he quickly eats more delicious chinse food with his brother at tonight,because he like dao something quickly.third,he goes to park with his family at one day morning.because he want to exerise with his mother and father.Last,he take a bus to fily.because he want go u.s.fnish his tady.

David Lin
09/15/2009
Writing 2A
I play pool
I had so many happy things in good last Sunday because I was happy. Example: my uncle and I went to played pool in pool hall on last Sunday at 2:00 to 4:00pm. We thought the Americas pool was easy, so we played this king pool in first hour only. Then we just played different kings pool in second hour because this pool was hard and it is form China. My uncle won so many time in the pool games because he was very strong, I was fun.

Edward Hur

Edward Hur
September 15, 2009
ESL Writing

First, In Saturday, I woke up at 11 o’clock because last night I slept 4 o’clock with my favorite friend Jay. Second, Jay and I ate the breakfast in cafeteria because we were hungry, but I thought that day breakfast tasted bad. Third Alex and I went Wal-mart at 4 o’clock because I have to buy trash can, cheese, and water. Fourth, I can’t found cheese for 20 minutes, but Alex found it. Last, Alex and I went dorm and ate delicious dinner at pm 7:00.

Raymundo Hernandez

9-15-09

Writing 2A

My Goal.

For this semester my goal is to improve my grades in the school.In the Cross Country, I have a good place in the championships, because i love running.!

The firts step is to do all my homework and pay attention in all the classes.

The second one is to complete the assignments from my teachers.

Third,I train Hard in the Cross Country.

state fair

Lydia Jung
150909
State faire
(1)I went to the State Fair on Saturday morning at 9:00 A.M. with dorm people, but some people didn’t go there because they thought It would be boring. State Fair was very big, and There were many animals such as pigs, cows, goats and horses. Also, there were many plants too. (3)I liked animals but I didn’t like plants, so It was boring to me. So I rode three ridings with Soen Jin and MiMi. However MiMi didn't like the biking, so she waited front of ridings, and she took a picture of us ridings.we wanted to ride more but, one riding costed us $5. It’s expensive, so we just looked around and ate food. It was not exiting except ridings, but it was my first time to go to state fair in America. It was very good experience for me.

Venus

Venus
09/15/09
Writing2A

I went to park last weekend
I went to park last weekend because I was boring. So I rode a bike to the park. I was by myself to went to park, and then American kids played soil, and I played with them. We had to make the soil building. It was cute. I saw the dog in this park. So I took picture of the dog.

alan,

writting 2A

My english name is alan bai ,and my chinanes name is Bai Tian.I'm from Xi AN city in china.I'm in 9 gread.I'm 16 yers old.

I like basketball and computergame very much,then I like sleep.

I like english very much.I want make my english better.

This is me.

alan.

alan.

state fair-kevin

1.I went to state fair and ate delicious pizza for 30 minutes with my friends because we are so hungry.

2.I and Ming, Eddie, Eric Cheng, Wang, Chad, Nick played some terrible entertainments in the state fair when I ate delicious lunch with them.

3.After we played some terrible entertainments, we were very tired and sat on the chair, looking at the helicopter in the sky.

4.After we walked around the state fair and played, we were hungry and bought some onions to eat.

5.After we left the state fair, everybody went to the bus and slept instantly because we played outside all the day and felt very tired.

Maxwell

This is my little sister. She is six years old. Her name is Wang Xinyu .There are four people in my family, my parents, my little sister and I .My sister is very cute, and my father very likes her. She is my family’s angel. When she called me brother, I’m happy. She has a good voices, she likes songs and she often songs at our home. She can dance, she dance very good. My parents hopes she study the piano, I hope so. But my sister disagree, we have no way. My parents deceived to give up. There is about my sister a small story. I miss them very much, and I hope my computer can become better, because I have to use it talk with my sister and my parent.

Maxwell

1. I and RA watched TV about football games at dorm last evening because I did not have something to do.
2. I did not know these foot ball starts and foot ball rules because in china we have never players and watched foot ball games.
3. So, the RA told me about a lot of rules and these super starts, but I did not remember these because these were new for me.
4. I argued with RA about which teams were better because I liked basketball more.
5. Finally, I was a winner, and he agreed basketball is better than foot ball games.

my goal form David

In NY

In China

17 years ago

Go to the statue of liberty

In China Garden

David Lin
09/10/2009
Writing 2A
My goal
My goal is I speaking good English. The speaking English is important for me. So, my first goal is I watching English TV and movie. This can help listening English and say English in live. Second I play some about spell words game in free time. This can help me review words. Third I go to library read books and newspaper. Then I need to speak only English with friends at anytime and study new sentence form friends. Last I need to check my homework everyday. This can help me grammar improve and I don’t do next time. This is my goal. I think it is good, but this is a little hard for me.

Edward

Edward
September 13, 2009
ESL Writing

Study hall time
Today we had study hall at 8:30. I have to go down stair. There are many people Example Eric, Jay, Steve, Paul, John and Cedric. I think they are study homework. During study hall we study homework 2hours. I did my ESL grammar homework and wrote journal. It was difficult but Steve was helped me for journal. Finally I did all my homework.

Kansas State Fair

Lydia Jung
140909
ESLwriting
Kansas State Fair
This Saturday, I went to Kansas state fair in Hutchison by the Bus with dorm students. It was very big festival. There are some cows, pigs, goats and horses. I saw very big horses, it was weird, he has very big had and he was walking like a monster.
I ate many things such as hamburger, chips, Ice cream, and pizza. Pizza was most delicious so, I ate two pieces of pizza. I rode riding with soen jin, MiMi and Hoyjin. After that I and Seon jin rode biking and spin. Biking was so exiting and scared, And when I was rode spin I lost my glasses but, MiMi found it. It was very lucky. We want rode more ridings but it was too expensive so, we just look around. It was so crowded . It was boring but I think it was good memory for me.

Naritasan temple

This picture is Naritasan temple. I left in Japan by plane on Thursday July 27, 2009 from Narita to Los Angeles before my husband and I went to Naritasan temple, before we had a lot of times for plane flying. There is the temple near Naritasan station, so we went to walk around it when saw many Japanese shops and many Japanese shop's staffs. The shops are older than other city shops and beautiful, also shop's staffs looked like energetic and happy. There is the temple hold naturally, stones, trees, and lake. We pray ourself for our future American life.

Venus

Venus

09/11/09

Today Mr. Nagakawa is divided the two groups, my team have three people. We need to answer the questions and press the machine. If the student answer correct, the student can come to the teacher, and then the students need guess the answer.

Venus Sun

Venus

Writing2A

09/11/2009

My goal

My goal is study well in this year. I don't need to go to the party just stay in the home,I will write my classes homework and count the math homework of algebra class,and I am go to library reads books and improve my English for speaking,and I will read science story and talk with American of students,and do the teacher need I to do the homework, I will types and check my journal and think about my journal topic. I need to improve my any classe grade, I will bring my homework for teacher everyday and don't be late,and I need to effort to study hard work,I will count more algebra and the study more world history.

My goal form David Lin

I was in China Garden dance

I went to play

I was in NY

in my birthday

David Lin
09/10/2009
Writing 2A
My goal
My goal is I can speak good English. The speak English is important for me. So, my first goal is watch English TV and movie. This can help listening English and how do to taking. Second I play move about spell words game in free time. This can help me review words. Third I go to library read books and newspaper. Then I need speaking only English with friends at anytime and study new sentence form friends. Last I need check my homework everyday. This can help me grammar and improve and this can lessen error next time. This is my goal. I thing this good, but this is a little hard for me.

Hisae

My goal is to improve my English.

I have 5 steps for my goals. First, I read some grammar books when I learn how to used sentence. I read English Mangas when I enjoy the story, also I want to read more. So, I understand first words in English. Second, I write journal when I think about some word, some sentences, some meanings, some grammars and, some ideas. I write words when want to remember words. Third, I listen to radio news. I don't understand news says, but I try to listen. When I watch some movies, I listen to voice and read captions, so I can understand the story better. Fourth, I speak to remember my words and sentence. My vocabulary is a little, if other can't understand, I change my word each time. Last, I change life style. I eat American food. I buy them in American stores. I feel a lot of culture. These will improve my English.

Lyia

my goal

Edward Hur
September 11, 2009
ESL writing

My goal
My goal is to study English harder than last year first, I will memorize lots of words. One day, I memorize 20 words by using dictionary when I don’t know words. Second, I will practice my speaking skills harder every day. I will talk with American friends and study speaking books in my room. Third, I will listen to teacher and ask question when I don’t know what to do. I also sit near the teacher, so I always take a note carefully. Fourth, I always do my homework. If I can’t do my homework after study hall I have to do my homework at night with Eric Choi and Paul Lim. Last I check my homework at study hall with Mr. Nakagawa. I always check homework and review myself at night. So, I get better in everything. These steps help me get my goal.

kevin

writting2A

my goal

I have a goal now. That is to let my English improve. If my English is great, everything is easier to learn. I also can know what a teacher say. If my english is very well, I can get more knowledge of textbooks. English is really important for me. In addition, I think many ways to improve my English.Example,first, I will listen to Englih video everyday and talk with American or teachers. Second, I will practice my conversation with speaking English loudly by yourself or with each others. Third, I will read newpapers, novel, textbook and take care of these words in here. Finally, I think I can understand English very well.

Maxwell Wang

Check Periods

My goal for Improve English
First, I will get up early and remember the English words every morning, the I will make the sentences, and I can practice speaking, for example ,talk with classmates, and read article loudly ,also I should practice listening , I should carefully listen to teacher and another people, after class I can answer the lusting question ,I think the grammar is very important ,because grammar can help me check my sentences, for study grammar, I want to read some newspaper to improve grammar ,final, I have to finish all homework and do more practice .

David Lin

My name is David. I have many friends in boy’s dorm. So, I dawdle in boy’s dorm everyday. Same time I went to boy’s dorm studied dance because I ‘m dancer and there has a good teacher. I like ice cream because it is good food. I ate ice cream and watched VCR in last summer. It is very fun. I have a wish. What is it? I hope I am an aviator because fling sky is funny and I like this job.

Hisae Nakagawa

My first time experience at ESL class

I had six students in ma class. My class is fifty-tow minutes. I joined this class first time today. The class had tow girls and fore boys. The student didn’t sleep and spoke English only. I learned verb and be today. I thought the class was difficult because I couldn’t listen to the teacher speaking English.

Soyoun Jung
190809
ESL writing2A
venus sun
My class mate Venus is an interesting person. She is from Taiwan. she can speaks taiwanese, chinese and english. she lives with hers parents, grandmother and older brother. she likes listen to music in hers free time. she likes classic music because classic music is quite. she think Nimo is most good movie she ever seen. she looks pretty but she doesn't have boy friend.

Kevin

Hello, my name is Kevin.

My class
I have classes in a day , such as math, physics, ESL, singing, religion. Among these classes, I really hate math and physics, because the speed of the speaking of teachers is too fast for me. However reefing to the content of the textbook, I think it is so easy for me. Today after school, the physics teacher told me to meet him. When I met him, he said that he worried about if I could know what he said in his class. Then, he gave me some works to do to
understand for those knowledge. I think the most important thing is learning English hard to
make my English improve.