12/16/09 David

David Lin
12/15/09
Writing 2A
Three Things that you learned
Topic
Before writing, you must think one topic about your writing to decide what do you need. Next you think many ideas about the topic. Then you choose best one to use it in your writing. After that you write concluding sentences and finish this write more sentences about the topic. Last you make the topic process. Put all sentences together to make big and nice story in your topic. You write complete topic.

Big sentences
In you writing you must make big and strong sentences to tell anther people more information about the topic. How do you make strong sentences? That is easy to do. First, you use “who, where, when, what, why, and how” to ask questions about the sentences to get more information to write in your sentences. You can make bigger sentences again. You can put adjective words and adverb before verbs into the sentences to make strong sentences. Last you must check you sentences is true and add all things don’t have mistakes. That is important for you to do in the finish the sentences.

Use Time
The time is very important for everybody because time is money, so we need to use true and complete time in you writing. These are about time questions words “when, what time or day, how long, and how often”. You need to complete answers them. “When” you need to answer what day, month, and year. “What time” you need to answer accurate and detailed time. “How long” you need to answer long or short time to give a number of times. “How often” means you do some things how many times in a day, week, month, or year. Sometimes you can use these words. They are “always, usually, often, sometimes, or never” etc. You must use in before the year, on before the day, at before time, or for before the how much time.

I know them are important for write litter and work at reports to tell anther people, what do I think about in the writing.