Writing2A(Homework)

Maxwell Wang
10/27/09
Writing2A


I am very busy after school
1. I need to call my parents and play computer game with Alan before dinner. Then I usually play basketball with RA and classmates and also will take shower at bathrooms before study hall. Finally, I do same housework to get some service hours for religion, so I need to sweep my floor everyday.
He helped me
1. David tells me what I should do when I just beginning the new American life. Also, he always helps me to translate to American teacher and students at school because my English is terrible. He helps me to learn ESL every night by teaching me how to read and how to write because my ESL grade is 80%.
I studied with David
1. I and David can finish our homework quickly through the internet because we usually exchange the idea. In physical science class, we are always in the same group to talk about the questions and solve because we are partners.

Alan Bai

Writing 2 A.
Alan Bai.
1.I'm busy after school.
(1)The first things, I need to wash my dirty clothes with Kevin in the laundry room.
(2)After that, I need to help Tonny and Jacky to cut their hair because they hair is to long.
(3)When I finish dinner, I have to write my Algebra homework in my bedroom because I have many home work need to do.
2.He helped me.
(1)Tonny is a good person in the donm because only he can helped me to cut my very curly hair.
(2)If I'm sick, Tonny often tells me to take medicine because I always forget to take it.
(3)Sometimes, some Algebra question is so hard for me, just he can teach me how to do it.
3. I studied with David.
(1)In the ESL listing class, he always teach me to write some questions because he is a very helpful person.
(2)In the ESL writing class, he can tell me some words's means because I'm not good at English.
(3)In the same class, we always speak English to talk about English questions.

Fire Alarm

writing2A

10/25/09

Kevin Tseng

Fire Alarm

Last Friday, We had a fire practice in the afternoon.We all people went to the playground and stayed there for a few time. After a few time, everybody backed to their rooms to continue the classes. I think the Fire Practice is necessary because if the fire really come, we have ome experiences to know how should we do. We do the Fire Practice many times and know how to do if the fire comes.

Yangyang

Oct 25
Yangyang

Last Friday, my school acting fire escape. When the bell rings start, teacher have order arrange student to escape. Each location has teacher everywhere. When we go to playground, the teacher will point. This let me feel, the teacher has responsible. And students first run our, after the teacher run out. The students are important of all.

Fire Alarm

Lydia Jung
25-10-09
ESLwriting

Alarm

TMP has a Alarm For any state of e mergency. For example, a fire, storm, and hurricane.

Last friday, emergency alarm rang, and i didn't know it was emergency alarm, i though it's just noisy sounds from somewhere, but it was emergency alarm so we went out from school.If it was real situation and i was alone , it was realy danger. TMP has practiced many times for state of emergency. At first time , I thought why we do this, but now I think it's very important thing in the school. My Korean school has alarm but we never practiced ,I hope all Korean schools do practice for Emergency.

ESL Writing 2A Homework(Security Depends on Vigilance)

Maxwell Wang
10/24/09
Writing2A

Safe Arises From Carefully
Safe arises from carefully , danger arises from careless. For example, fire arise form people are careless. For TMP, we are safe because we have practiced for many times about what should we do when the fire coming. Yesterday, we went though the fire practiced again, when the fire alarm was whistling, all of students and teacher were going out to the playground. At the playground, we waited for the fire alarm was end. During this time, we have no running, no fear, we were organized. When the fire alarm was end, we came back to classroom to study. So, if we are carefully an aroid the loss.

Venus

Venus Sun
10/24/09
Writing2A

Fire alarm

Today school has fire alarm. So students follow a teacher to go to outside. The outside is cold but the sky has sun. We are standing in the grass. The winds blow me, I feel very cold. Teacher is count students. Every student is in here. We wait for going to inside. We are feeling cold so we stand behind one person because they can keep off wind. We will feel not cold. When we going to the school. We go to the class.

Edward Hur

Edward Hur
October 22, 2009
ESL Writing
Student and Teacher

In small room, one student asks the homework to teacher. Teacher wants student work himself but he can’t do it. One student is sit and boy. His expression is nervous because woman can’t understand what his problem. The woman looks his homework paper harder than before but she doesn’t know anything. Finally, they can’t solve the homework.

Lydia

Lydia Jung
231009

vacation

Andy and Hellen are best friends. They went to New york for their's spring vacation. Thet went to shopping and they took many pictures and they bought many clothes. they were so exited. They spent too much money but it was so fun.

Lydia

Lydia Jung

22.10.09

How to protect my self from sickness

{1}Wash hands
If you wash hands many timmes, you can protect yourself from sickness, for example in rest room, before eat something and after you go back to home. If you don't wash your hands, germs from rest room can go inside your body through your mouth or eyes , and it will makes you sick.

{2}Do exercise
Do exercise makes you healthy so your body can kill germs. For example, when your freind caugh and your freind's germs go to your body then tried make you sick. If your body is healthy your body kills germs so you can protect your self from sickness

{3}wear more clothes
If you wear more cloths, it makes you warm and protect your body from cold weather. For example, In the snow If you wear many cloth Such as gloves,hat,warmers,socks,jackets,and outter, you can protect your body from cold weather and you can play in the snow long time.

Yangyang

Best friends

Lucy and Tim are students. They just finish middle test. Because middle test use more students need hard study. They not have free time. Now they began to holiday, Tim and Lucy decided to take a tour. They bought at the store a lot of clothes, dress and food. They are very happy. Because this city is beautiful, and after school they will separate. So they have use telephone take a photo, and souvenir. They are happy, and smile is beautiful.

Two Crazy Girls

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kevin Tseng

10/22/09

Two Crazy Girls

One day, two crazy girls in Taipei go shopping all the day. They buy many things like T-shirts, pants, dresses, hats, coats, and some expensive rings. They spend much money shopping in Taipei street. They also take some pictures with cell phone. They are very happy and satisfied.They enjoy their life very much.

Study Hall

Venus Sun
10/22/09
Writing2A

Best friends

The two girls, they are best friends. They are going to shopping. They are in the beautiful building to take a picture. They are much exited because they buy many things they like. They have very big smile. They take picture on the cell phone. They take many bag and stuff. They wear very beautiful clothes, and the cell phone is new one. So they want take a picture be it wallpaper because they are best friends.

ESL Writing Homework(Study Hall)

A Funny misunderstanding
This is a peaceful office, everything are normal, suddenly the door opened and a man burst in. He speaks is loudly, he is saying:"your boss borrowed me 100000 dollars, and I have asked him for my money for many times. I can't stand, I argued with him, at last time, he gave an address to me. He lets me find him according to this address. Where is your boss?"In this time, the woman is very surprise and she doesn't say anything. She only is looking at the man, and then she says:"This is a police office"

three ways to protect myself from sick

David Lin
10/21/09
Writing 2A
Three Ways to Protect Myself from Sick
If I don’t want to get sick, I have three things can do. First is do more exercise; second is sit away form sick people; last one is use Hand Sanitizer wash hand before lunch. For example: I do more exercise in my free time. I am running in everyday after school. Running can help my body became hot, so my body can not easy get sick and my energy can became strong. Next example is for sit away form sick people. My ESL class I am sitting whit Alan. If Alan is sick. I will move my table to go to back. I don’t doing everything and talking with him. Don’t have too much touch. I need to talk something for him. I will write down in the paper then send to him. If he coughs. I will use my hands shut out my mouth. Last example is use Hand sanitizer wash hands before lunch. I used hands do everything, so my hands have many germs. If I don’t wash my hands go to lunch. Than use hands touch food eating. My body gets many germs from the food, so I will easy get sick. I need to use Hand Sanitizer wash hand before lunch. The Hand Sanitizer can help kills germs. Then I can eat healthy food.

Edward Hur

Edward Hur
October 21, 2009
ESL Writing

How to Protect Myself from Sickness

1. Wash my hands
When I come to the dorm, wash my hands because it will be remove dirty things and virus. So, virus or germs can’t go my body. In addition, I can eat food better than before. I can try kind of run, play soccer, jump and play volleyball because my healthy is good.
2. Do more exercise
I think exercise makes me healthy. If I have exercise every day, I won’t get illness. In addition, if I do more exercise than before, my health will be strong. So, virus and germs can’t join to my body. I am healthy, I can do many things. For example, I can study English harder than when I sick. Then I can play soccer very well because I can do quickly
3. sit away from sick people
I think sitting next to sick people is bad action because those sick people might spread bad germs to other healthy people. If I talk with sick people, I will sick quickly than other people because bad germs and virus will enter to my body. Then they will break to my body. It’s too terrible for people.

Alan Bai

Do more exercise.
The weather is colder and colder. So so many people have cold. That's sounds to bad. So people should be health. So they should always do exercise to keep health because do more exercise can make people have good resistance. If you do more exercise, I think you can health because exercise is good for people.


Drink more water.
The weather is coloder. So people also feel cold. Then they should drink more water because water have so many mineral. So water is good for people's health. So we should drink more water. When you drink more water you can health because water is good for our health. The water is not delicious but is very good drinking. So we need drink more water.


Eat more good food.
The weather is coloer. So many people can easy have sick. So we should eat more good food. Like green food , fruit and vegetable because these food have so many nutrition. So these food can make people keep health. So we should eat more good food to keep health. The fruit is very good food in the world because it is very good for our health. The vegetable is same as fruit. So we should eat more fruit and vegetable.

Yang Yang

Wear more clothes
The weather is cold, we can have cold. So we need wear more clothes. We stay in the room, but outside is cold. If we are wearing more clothes, we can easy have cold. So we go out we have worn more clothes. So we are not having cold.

More wash hands
We need to wash hands, because we touch much stuff every day. If we don’t often wash hands. For example, when we eat lunch, if we don’t wash hands and use hands to take food eat. We can eat not food and easy have kill. So we should often wash hands.

Often clean room
We have keep our room clean. Because clean environment not easy kill. If your room isn’t clean, and you not often clean your room. Your room have a lot of germs. So we are easy kill. But you often clean your room, keep your room clean, and your room is not haven’t germs. So you don’t have killed. So we have often cleaned our room.

cold

writting2A

kevin Tseng

10/21/09

1.Wear more clothes. We need to wear more clothes to get warm. If we do not wear enough clothes, we will easily get cold. Example, I did not wear enough clothes and went out to eat something last weekend, then when I back to the dorm, I felt very bad and had a fever, cough, and runnng nose. I think it is really important to wear enough clothes.

2.Do exercise. We need to do enough exercise like baseball, basketball, soccer, jog, and football because if we do exercise, we can be strong and healthy. If we are not strong and healthy, we are easily sick. I think if we do exercise everyday, maybe we can get a good health.

3. Eat enough food. We should eat enough food to get some energy. If we do not eat enough food, we do not have enough energy to do anything like writing, reading, and listening in the class. We can not live without eating enough food. I think we must eat enough food everyday.

Venus Sun

Venus Sun

10/21/09

Writing 2A

Protect myself not be sickness

Wear more clothes
When I going to the outside. I have warm jacket because today’s weather is cold. I wear many clothes inside because I scared get sick. For example: in the morning. I am going to school. I wear sweater and jacket. It is so warm. I have warm three more such as long pants, T-shirt and school T-shirt.

Drink water
I feel thirsty and I am get the water because water is healthy than drinks. In the night, I have drunk the hot water for myself to be warm. For example, in the PE class I feel thirsty. So I go to get water. When I go to home I feel cold. I have drunk hot water. Water is real healthy for everybody because the water doesn’t have color and it is clear. Water is good for dry skin too.

Eat vitamin c fruit
When I and my parents are go to the Wal-mart. We have bought the fruit because the fruit have vitamin c can keep our healthy. For example, we have bought the orange and apple and vegetable to eat. After dinner we eat so many fruit. Because those have many healthy and sweet juice in the fruit. So it can protect myself not be a sickness.

ESL Writing Homework(About flu)

1.Do more exercise.We need to do more exercise,we should play basketball ,run,or other sports after school or after school.Do exercise make us strong,if we are strong,we aren't afraid the flu.
2.Eat more fruits or vegetables.We need to eat more health food .For example,apples,orange,banana ,and vegetables.We can get more vitamin C form fruits and vegetables.They make our body can balanced.Be carefully,no junkfood.

3.Keep opening the window.When I go back to dorm,opening the window is mu first thing because we need to keep fresh air.The wind can take the virus into the environment.If the room don't have virus,and we can not get the flu.So we need to keep opening the window.

xsadas

First Study Hall for ESL

David Lin
10/14/09
Writing 2A
First Study Hall for ESL
This is my first time going to Study Hall for ESL classes, and I am very excited for 3 reasons. First, it is because I didn’t finish my yesterday homework. For example, I can do my yesterday homework in Study Hall. Then I type and print it. I can give Mr. Nakagawa homework in tomorrow. I don’t lose my point for ESL Writing 2A class. I am so lucky. Second, it is because I have free time. For example, if I finish this ESL class homework. I can do other class homework in Study Hall. If I finish all homework in Study Hall. I will have much time do everything in my home. I can watch TV and play computer games. Third, it is because I can do everything. For example, I don’t want do my homework in Study Hall. I can go to home do my homework, so I have much time to do anything in Study Hall. If I am tired, I can sleep or friends and I can speak Chinese in there. Sometime, I play game in Study Hall. In my opinion, this is a good Study Hall. I very like it. I hope to have one time Study Hall in every week Friday. Please Mr. Nakagawa.

Edward Hur

Edward Hur
October 14, 2009
ESL Writing

First Study Hall for ESL

This is my first time going to Study Hall for ESL classes, and I am very excited for 3 reasons. First, it is because we can study what I want. For example, in class we can't study others, but I can study algebra at study hall. Then I do not have to do math homework the day after. My English skill is probably getting more improved. Second, it is because I can concentrate on my homework. For example, during study hall time I can more concentrate than other times. I usually can write journal 1 hour but in study hall, I can finish journal 30 minutes. In addition I could study in quiet atmosphere. Students can't talk on study hall time. Third, it is because we don’t have homework on that day because we don’t meet teacher. We can do anything at evening. I can rest on homework time in dorm. In my opinion, sometimes it would be good to go to study hall.

ESL Writing Homework(Study Hall)

This is my first time going to Study Hall for ESL classes, and I am very excited for 3 reasons.First,it's because we are freedom.For example,we can talk with American students.We can be late.We can go to washroom for long time.We can be relaxing.We don't worry get penalty periods if we speak in Chinese.
Second,it's because we have free time.For example,we can do homework .we have enough ability time to finish ESL exercise.we have free time to check these answers.if we didn't finish yesterday ESL homework,we can do it now at ESL classes.
Third,it's because many many TMP students sit tougher.For example,we can exchange experience that how to improve grads with American students.we can talk about difficult problem of math.We can practise ENG form talking.It's very lively in this class.We have an impetus to study if we are sitting toughter.
In my opinion,although,Mr. nakagawa was not here,but these freedom only are fancy. We know what should we do if the teacher was not here.Please trust us.

Alan bai. writing 2 A

First study Hall for ESL
This is my first time going to study Hall for ESL class, and I am very excited for 3 reasons. First, it is because very novelty for me. For example, I always have study Hall in the morning, this time, is my first time study in here. I'm very excited. I should do my self for ESL homework. Second, it is because very interesting. I can only be self-study. It's different than general ESL class. In the study Hall, I can be study hard. Third, it is because very good for my work. For example, when I finish the ESL homework, I can do my Algebra homework. Then, I can have free time to have rest . In here, Everybody is quite. When I finish the all the work, I can review other courses. But I think study Hall for ESL is not good for my reading and listing. In my opinion, study Hall for ESL is very norelty interesting for me. And very good for my work.

First Study Hall for ESL

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Kevin Tseng
10/13/09

First Study Hall for ESL

This is my first time going to Study Hall for ESL classes, and I am very excited for 3 reasons.

First, it is because It is a quiet place to do my homeworks. For example, I can do my other homework after I finish my works of writing2A. people here must be quiet, so everybody can review notes that teachers teach in class and also can do my assignments. I think I can do many things in Study Hall.

Second, If I do not have any homework, I can study for tomorrow. For example, I sometimes have a test or a quiz next day, so if I finish the works of writing2A, I can prepare for a test or a quiz in Study Hall time so that I have more free time to do what I want after school .

Third, it is because I do other things after school. For example, If I finish my homework in Study Hall time, I can do other things after school like studying for tomorrow test and quiz, surfing the net, cheating with my friends, and sleeping from 4 o'clock to Study Hall time.

In my opinion, If you can uce Study Hall time very well, it can help you save time to do other things you like. I think Study Hall is good for my grade.

First Study Hall for ESL

Lydia Jung
131009
ESL writing

First Study Hall for ESL

This is my first time going to Study Hall for ESL classes, and I am very excited for 3 reasons.
First, it is because after work we can do my other homework. For example, if I finish this journal I can do my math homework for tomorrow, So after school I don't have homework. It means I can play.
Second, it is because I didn't do my homework. we had homework for writing class, make a table for journal than type it , also print out. but I didn't type so I did my homework in the Study Hall.
Third, it is because we don't have homework for today. ESL homework always took a long time and I need print out, but today we don't have homeworks so I think, I can chat with my friends and family in today evening.
In my opinion, today study hall was nice , but I wonder that why we had Study Hall for ESL 5th and 6th hours. I think sometimes if we have study hall it will be good for my grade.

First Study Hall for ESL

Venus
10/13/09
Writing2A

First study hall for ESL

This is my first time going to Study Hall for ESL classes, and I am very excited for 3 reasons.
First, it is because we can do our things. For example, we can do class homework. I have drawing in study hall because I am boring. When I finish all work. I look my schedule. I have write today’s homework on it. I don’t have much homework to do.
Second, it is because the room is quiet. For example, we can’t talk with other classmates. We need do the homework. We can do anything. But we can’t have noisy. The study hall is quiet like library.
Third, it is because we don’t need write much homework. For example, we just do the exercise and it is not so much. We finish it for ten minutes. It is very quickly finish this work. This exercise is not hard for our. We have learned this before.
In my opinion, in the study hall, we can’t sleep and talking. I think those are true because we need to do our work. Some students are busy because they have work to do. Some students put away their stuff in book bag.

Edward Hur

Edward Hur
October 5, 2009
ESL Writing

I had 2 activities that I forgot to do
First, I forgot to do my homework. For example, I had ESL homework 3 days ago but I forgot. Then I did my homework at 12:00 p.m. I was very sleepy but I have to do my homework. I finally, did my ESL homework at 1:30 a.m. second, I forgot to speak Korean in TMP school building. For example, I spoke Korean in ESL class on last Thursday with Ho dong at rest time. After ESL Writing time I got penalty period. I was sad. I have to do school at 6:50 because I have to writing ward. That’s punishment. Next time, I will not to speak Korean.

Alan Bai.

I had two activities that I forgot to do last weekend. First, I forgot to played basketball because I was busy. For example, I weak up at 1:00 p.m. On Saturday. Then I toke a shower , and wash my face, and brush my teeth. When I finish, it's 2:00 p.m. Then I play the computer games. When I was finish , I remember I should play basketball with mexwil two hours ago so I ask mexwil I'm forgot. Scend, I forgot to talk with my mother on the Internet because, when I used computer, I just play games and saw some news. So I forgot two activities.

Forgot to do

Lydia Jung
10-05-09

I had 2 Activities that I for got to do. First, I forgot to go to the Walmart, I need to buy fruits,lotion,Note book and cell phone but, on weekend I woke up at 12:00 p.m and 10:00a.m .
Second, I forgot to get signs for service hours. last saturday I have to go to church and get sign for last month's service hours, but I need to ask to teacher or I need to get more service hours.

ESL Writing Homework

I had two activities that I forgot to do last week.First, I forgot to pay for money for print,I finished the writing homework,I need print,when I printed the writing home work at RA office,I forgot to pay for it,so I'm sorry for that and I will return it today.second ,I forgot to buy a blanket on thursday.when I go to bed,I frlt cool,so I have a col.it's terrible.

kevin

writting2A

10/5/09

kevin Tseng

I forgot two things

I had 2 activities that I forgot to do last weekend. First, I forgot to talk with my mother last weekend. Because I always did other things and did not get my mother's phone. My mother told me I must talk to her to say what happened in school and dorm every weekend, but I did not do that this weekend.Second, I forgot to eat lunch last Saturday because I overslept. Last Friday, I stayed up until 5 o'clock, so I slept almost a day. Finally, I hope I will never forget the two because if I do not talk to my mother, my mother will be very angry, if I do not eat meals, I think I just waste my parent's money.

I Forgot.

Raymundo Hernandez

10-05-09
Writing 2A

I Forgot.

First,I forgot to do my homework the last thursday in the school.
For example: 1.- I forgot to do it my government assignment.
2.- I forgot because i dont take my assignment fron my locker.
3.- I forgot too my assignment from History class with Mr.Klein but the last friday.
4.- I forgot because i had a lot of homework from the others classes.
I think i must be careful with my homework because can lower my grade.
Second , I forgot to wash my clothes the last Sunday in my house.
For example: 1.- I forgot because i need to go to the church the last sunday in the morning.
2.- After that i need go to do it my sevice hours in another house , where i helped
to others persons.
3.- It is was the last sunday in the morning but when i finished my service hours i take a rest.
4.- I try to never happen again i dont like be busy every weekend.
I think i must organize my time for never happen again and it has time to make the things that i like.

Venus sun

Venus
10/05/09

Writing2A

I forgot things
First, I forgot to wake up in the weekend. For example: I can sleep ten hours. I did not finish my homework. I did not eat my breakfast. So I felt nervous because I needed to write much homework, and I needed to cook lunch.Second, I forgot to bring my glasses. For example: I can't see the white board. I needed ask classmate about word on the white board. So I was scared because I needed write down so many words. I had to borrow classmate paper.

My Favorite Day

Raymundo Hernandez

Writing 2A

My Favorite Day.

My favorite day is Friday because as soon as begins the days without school. I can rent several films the Friday and see them the rest of the weekend. From Friday I can sleep very behind schedule and I do not worry to attend the school to the other day.