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Kevin Tseng
My room
My room is messy and small. When I take of my clothes, I usually put my dirty clothes anywhere like bed, desk, and closet. I sometimes drink milk in my room and drop it to the trash can. When the time is passing a moment, my room will smell terrible. My room now is messy and dirty, so I decision I will clean my room this weekend.
Advice: 1. You should take all clothes in the closet because if you do not take them, they will look bad.
2. You should drink milk in the cafeteria because if you drink in the room, the
room will smell terrible.
3. You should clean your trash can every time because trash can make your room smell bad.
4. You should take a shower after you play basketball. If you do not do it, you will smell terrible.
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Dear Edward
Thank you for your advices, I agree with your advices. I think I really will clean my room. My room now smells and looks terrible. I will never drink milk in my room because not only my roommate will be angry but also my room will smell bad and terrible. If I do not clean my room, I and my roommate maybe will get sick and be uncomfortable. After you give me these good advices, I will do them hard and make my room clean.
Kevin Tseng
My room
My room is messy and small. When I take of my clothes, I usually put my dirty clothes anywhere like bed, desk, and closet. I sometimes drink milk in my room and drop it to the trash can. When the time is passing a moment, my room will smell terrible. My room now is messy and dirty, so I decision I will clean my room this weekend.
Advice: 1. You should take all clothes in the closet because if you do not take them, they will look bad.
2. You should drink milk in the cafeteria because if you drink in the room, the
room will smell terrible.
3. You should clean your trash can every time because trash can make your room smell bad.
4. You should take a shower after you play basketball. If you do not do it, you will smell terrible.
Dear Edward
Thank you for your advices, I agree with your advices. I think I really will clean my room. My room now smells and looks terrible. I will never drink milk in my room because not only my roommate will be angry but also my room will smell bad and terrible. If I do not clean my room, I and my roommate maybe will get sick and be uncomfortable. After you give me these good advices, I will do them hard and make my room clean.
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