Venus Sun

Venus Sun
Writing2A
11/15/09
My room is clean
My room is clean because I put my books very neat. My room smell is fresh because I through away the trash when trash is full. I always listen to music on computer. It is make me fun. It is my room noise. My room looks so many stuff of pencil and computer and paper, printer, CD, chair. But I have put in good place for them. So it is clean. Sometimes I map my room and sweep my room.

Advice:
1. You should not often through away the trash because that room smell is not fresh.
2. You should not put your books very neat because you should study, if your book put neat, you don’t have every time study.
3. When you listen to music on computer, you should put loud music and open radio because it can make very good noise.
4. You should not map your room because it can make you tired.
5. You should not sweep your room because it is not fun.
E-mail:
Dear Yang yang, thank you for yours advices. However, I disagree with your advices because if I don’t have through away the trash, it can make my room bad smell. So I need to through away trash everyday. My books always put in book bag because I don’t need to use. So I put in my book bag. I think if I open music on computer and listen radio together. It can make me dizzy. So I just open music on computer because I can use it. I need to map my room sometimes because I feel my room is dirty, and I need to sweep my room because I feel my room has a lot trash in floor.