Raymundo Hernandez

11-14-09

Writing 2A

All my room is neat an organized because i try to clean up everyday.My bed look really comfortable because its everything in order and my pilow always smells good.Inside of my closet, all my shirts and pants are organized.

Somebody daid to me: (Hisae)

-You should put on books on the flower because they show dirty.

-You dont should make on the bed because blanket is droped on the floor.

-You should put on a lot of food during two months because they will smells bad.

Dear Hisae:

Thank you for your advices , however i disagree because i like my room when is clean and smells good .Also i like when everything is organized. See you.!