Edward Hur
November 30, 2009
ESL Writing
It was very fun thanksgiving break experience, and I had 3 specific fun times last week. First, it is playing short ski with Koreans. For example, I used the short ski. It was very shorter than others. By the way, it makes me confused and use hard. But, it was very exciting. I can change direction easier than normal ski. In addition, I was very fast when I used the ski. After lunch, I and Koreans were go skiing. It is so much snow in there. I played there with Koreans. I had good skiing time. In my opinion, I want to go Colorado again and go skiing more time than before. Second, it is delicious food in Colorado. For example, first day, we ate only noodle and rice. It was taste not bad. But, I don’t want to eat again. Second day, we ate breakfast in Cedric Kim’s room because he made chicken porridge for us. It was taste very good because I think we were hungry. After we were go skiing we went to the shrimp restaurant. It was taste very great. I ate shrimp heaven. That is the name of food. In my opinion, if that shrimp restaurant in Hays, I will eat again that food. Third, it is very big mall in Colorado. For example, third day, we decided to go to the mall. It looked very good and big. There were much kind of clothes and shoes in there. We used Colorado bus. First time, we waited in Colorado station then go to the mall. We spend 1 hour in Colorado station. When we went the mall I bought Nike shoes and Banana republic clothes. We came back to the hotel at 7:00 P.M. in my opinion I want to buy more clothes when we go to the Colorado next year because that time is cheaper than others.
Monday, November 30, 2009
Maxwell Wang 11/30/2009
ESL Writing2a
Maxwell
11/30/20009
My ski trip
It was very fun thanksgiving break experience , and I had 3 specific fun time last week.First,it is taking bus.For example, we plaed computer game togeather.we played cards by four people. We singed loudly at the school. We played bingo ,and gave money to us who lost it.In my opinion,although the way is long,but didn't feel boring.
Second,it is going skiing at snow moution.For example, I and Yang Yang had a snowball fight. I ,Alan and Yang Yang maked a snowman. I went skiing for 15 times at this moution. I failed down for many time,it's hurt, but it's funny. In my opinion,the ski can steel my self ,it make you strong. you need to find fun and mistakes from fail. It can be beeter.
Third, it is cooking Chinese food at hotel.For example, we went to the surpermarket ,and we agrue about need to buy or didn't to need .It's a funny arguing.
We asked restaurant for some seasoning ,we explained to the boss what we want to do ,and she said ,she sured do and they are free!Nobady can cook, we cooked these food is not delicous,but ecerybody ate a lots food ,after that we went to the washroom because we had stomachache.In my opinion, although we cooked were not good ,but theses food were cooked by ourself. It's our work ,we ike it . I enjoy this trip.
Maxwell
11/30/20009
My ski trip
It was very fun thanksgiving break experience , and I had 3 specific fun time last week.First,it is taking bus.For example, we plaed computer game togeather.we played cards by four people. We singed loudly at the school. We played bingo ,and gave money to us who lost it.In my opinion,although the way is long,but didn't feel boring.
Second,it is going skiing at snow moution.For example, I and Yang Yang had a snowball fight. I ,Alan and Yang Yang maked a snowman. I went skiing for 15 times at this moution. I failed down for many time,it's hurt, but it's funny. In my opinion,the ski can steel my self ,it make you strong. you need to find fun and mistakes from fail. It can be beeter.
Third, it is cooking Chinese food at hotel.For example, we went to the surpermarket ,and we agrue about need to buy or didn't to need .It's a funny arguing.
We asked restaurant for some seasoning ,we explained to the boss what we want to do ,and she said ,she sured do and they are free!Nobady can cook, we cooked these food is not delicous,but ecerybody ate a lots food ,after that we went to the washroom because we had stomachache.In my opinion, although we cooked were not good ,but theses food were cooked by ourself. It's our work ,we ike it . I enjoy this trip.
My Thanksgiving Break
It was very fun thanksgiving break experience, and i had 2 specific fun time last week.
Firts, it is My family just hung around and enjoyed each others company. My brother made dinner and I made dessert.We ate at my friends house at 12, then ate my house at 3, then hung out with my family, then went to my grandma's house at 6:30 to eat dinner. Had some family and friends over and ate a big 20 pound turkey. For desert we had homemade pumpkin pie and homemade sweet potato pie.
In my Opinion,Thankful for how kind and amazing reality will be once you are kind and amazing to yourself and others.
Second, it is when we went to walt mart the last friday as know called the black friday. Its when you Usually, you should buy the things that have the best bargain! Like sometimes, my parents buy the TVS and all the game systems, because that's mostly what has the best bargain.
In my opinion,i dont care for the holiday. im no more thankful for things im thankful for than i am any day. i appreciate the things i have everyday, and dont need a holiday for it.
Firts, it is My family just hung around and enjoyed each others company. My brother made dinner and I made dessert.We ate at my friends house at 12, then ate my house at 3, then hung out with my family, then went to my grandma's house at 6:30 to eat dinner. Had some family and friends over and ate a big 20 pound turkey. For desert we had homemade pumpkin pie and homemade sweet potato pie.
In my Opinion,Thankful for how kind and amazing reality will be once you are kind and amazing to yourself and others.
Second, it is when we went to walt mart the last friday as know called the black friday. Its when you Usually, you should buy the things that have the best bargain! Like sometimes, my parents buy the TVS and all the game systems, because that's mostly what has the best bargain.
In my opinion,i dont care for the holiday. im no more thankful for things im thankful for than i am any day. i appreciate the things i have everyday, and dont need a holiday for it.
Alan Bai. Nov 30
Wtiting 2 A.
Alan Bai.
My ski trip
It was very fun thanksgiving break experience, and I had 3 specific fun time last week. First, it is hard to learn. For example, when I learned it, I fell down many times, so my body is very hurt. In my opinion, it is interting I like it. Second, it is intereting for cook dinner. For example, we are hotel have kitchen, so we are cook in the hotel. There have a small supermarket never here. We buy some food and vegetable to cook. In my opinion, it is very exciting. I like it very much. Third, I feel curious about go for walk. We have three night, every night I go for walk with mexwell and kevin. We are spend long time to do it because this city is very beautiful. In my opinoin, I like this city very much because it is this city is very beautiful. This is my ski trip.
Alan Bai.
My ski trip
It was very fun thanksgiving break experience, and I had 3 specific fun time last week. First, it is hard to learn. For example, when I learned it, I fell down many times, so my body is very hurt. In my opinion, it is interting I like it. Second, it is intereting for cook dinner. For example, we are hotel have kitchen, so we are cook in the hotel. There have a small supermarket never here. We buy some food and vegetable to cook. In my opinion, it is very exciting. I like it very much. Third, I feel curious about go for walk. We have three night, every night I go for walk with mexwell and kevin. We are spend long time to do it because this city is very beautiful. In my opinoin, I like this city very much because it is this city is very beautiful. This is my ski trip.
kevin Tseng
writing2A
Kevin Tseng
11/30/09
My ski trip
It was fun thanksgiving break experience, and I had 3 specific fun time last week.
First, it is exciting for me.
For example, I went to the top of the mountain. I played the snowboard game. It is my first time to play snowboard, so it is hard for me. The mountain is high and the sloping fields are very steep. I am afraid but excited.
In my opinion, I think I really like the snowboard exercise. In the beginning, I was afraid of playing snowboard, but gradually, I can play it better and felt exciting, not dangerous.
Second, it is hard for me.
For example, there is no snow in Taiwan, so I did not play any ski or snowboard before.This is my first time to play them, so when I played them, I can not exactly stop and control directions.
In my opinion, I think snowboard is really had for me. I still can not play snowboard really good because I can not stop well.
Third, it is interesting for me.
For example, I can play snowboard with my friends. we can play together. that will be more interesting, we also can contest who is faster. when I can easily control snowboard, I felt interesting, not afraid.
In my opinion, i think this ski trip is valuable because I can control snowboard easiler than before. I had fun with my friends. I think I will never forget this ski trip forever.
Kevin Tseng
11/30/09
My ski trip
It was fun thanksgiving break experience, and I had 3 specific fun time last week.
First, it is exciting for me.
For example, I went to the top of the mountain. I played the snowboard game. It is my first time to play snowboard, so it is hard for me. The mountain is high and the sloping fields are very steep. I am afraid but excited.
In my opinion, I think I really like the snowboard exercise. In the beginning, I was afraid of playing snowboard, but gradually, I can play it better and felt exciting, not dangerous.
Second, it is hard for me.
For example, there is no snow in Taiwan, so I did not play any ski or snowboard before.This is my first time to play them, so when I played them, I can not exactly stop and control directions.
In my opinion, I think snowboard is really had for me. I still can not play snowboard really good because I can not stop well.
Third, it is interesting for me.
For example, I can play snowboard with my friends. we can play together. that will be more interesting, we also can contest who is faster. when I can easily control snowboard, I felt interesting, not afraid.
In my opinion, i think this ski trip is valuable because I can control snowboard easiler than before. I had fun with my friends. I think I will never forget this ski trip forever.
Yangyang
Nov 30
ESLwriting2a
Yang yang
My ski tripIt was very fun thanksgiving break experience, and I had 3 specific fun times last week.First, it is interesting. I first time skiing, I need go skiing lesson. Jiawen Maxwell David sally Amy and I a group. Beginning, Maxwell said let us fall down, but he is a first one fall down we all laughed. After the teacher teach us turn. Jiawen say she do for me, finally she didn’t check the car and she took me stumble, we are fall down together. And David takes a photo for me fall down with Jiawen. It is interesting. In my opinion, I like this activity. Second it is dangerous. Because I just learn how to skiing. When I was ski happy, suddenly have a break. I don’t ready, and I not stop car, out bitter rejection. Finally let an ambulance take me down. Because I take car up, and this is first time, so I don’t know terrain is what. In my opinion, when skiing we must see terrain. Third, it is friendly. Because once myself to skiing relatively steep slope, when I fall down. Although I stop car but I fell down. Because the steep is too slope, when I slide the body would fall down. I am afraid, suddenly an American helps me. He put me up, and he protect me and teach me how to skiing fall down. Finally we spent long time down the hill. In my opinion, everybody is very friendly.
ESLwriting2a
Yang yang
My ski tripIt was very fun thanksgiving break experience, and I had 3 specific fun times last week.First, it is interesting. I first time skiing, I need go skiing lesson. Jiawen Maxwell David sally Amy and I a group. Beginning, Maxwell said let us fall down, but he is a first one fall down we all laughed. After the teacher teach us turn. Jiawen say she do for me, finally she didn’t check the car and she took me stumble, we are fall down together. And David takes a photo for me fall down with Jiawen. It is interesting. In my opinion, I like this activity. Second it is dangerous. Because I just learn how to skiing. When I was ski happy, suddenly have a break. I don’t ready, and I not stop car, out bitter rejection. Finally let an ambulance take me down. Because I take car up, and this is first time, so I don’t know terrain is what. In my opinion, when skiing we must see terrain. Third, it is friendly. Because once myself to skiing relatively steep slope, when I fall down. Although I stop car but I fell down. Because the steep is too slope, when I slide the body would fall down. I am afraid, suddenly an American helps me. He put me up, and he protect me and teach me how to skiing fall down. Finally we spent long time down the hill. In my opinion, everybody is very friendly.
Venus Sun
Venus Sun
Writing2A
11/30/09
Writing2A
11/30/09
I went to Wichita
It was very fun thanksgiving break experience, and I had 3 specific fun time last week.
First, it is interested for me.
For example, I saw the beautiful scenic. I liked to take the pictures. I was enjoying having those pictures to show my family. The scenic was nice because the building was elegant. So when I saw this kind building, I was quickly to take it.
In my opinion, I was having fun to take the pictures.
Second, it is free day.
For example, I was going to Chinese restaurant with my parents and their friends. We had gone to Thai shop to bought Taiwanese foods. We enjoy eating Chinese foods. When I went to restaurant and shop, I was very excited because I liked those foods. I had eat many foods of I liked.
In my opinion, in the Thai shop my parents and I had buy a lot Taiwanese foods and drink of we liked.
Third, it is good for us.
For example, my parents and I were not staying at home in this day. We were going to shopping and eat Chinese foods. We were seeing the big city of Wichita. There had many Chinese shop and restaurant we were missing our country because there had sell the Taiwanese foods. We were very happy to eat again.
In my opinion, we had enjoy going to Wichita and we felt very glad to seeing Wichita.
First, it is interested for me.
For example, I saw the beautiful scenic. I liked to take the pictures. I was enjoying having those pictures to show my family. The scenic was nice because the building was elegant. So when I saw this kind building, I was quickly to take it.
In my opinion, I was having fun to take the pictures.
Second, it is free day.
For example, I was going to Chinese restaurant with my parents and their friends. We had gone to Thai shop to bought Taiwanese foods. We enjoy eating Chinese foods. When I went to restaurant and shop, I was very excited because I liked those foods. I had eat many foods of I liked.
In my opinion, in the Thai shop my parents and I had buy a lot Taiwanese foods and drink of we liked.
Third, it is good for us.
For example, my parents and I were not staying at home in this day. We were going to shopping and eat Chinese foods. We were seeing the big city of Wichita. There had many Chinese shop and restaurant we were missing our country because there had sell the Taiwanese foods. We were very happy to eat again.
In my opinion, we had enjoy going to Wichita and we felt very glad to seeing Wichita.
Monday, November 23, 2009
Lydia Jung
231109
Lydia Jung
ESL writing
Funny Maxwell
He suddenly laughs during the class ,for He thinks about his future marriage. He thinks about his wife ,and romantic life with her. It looks wierd, crazy, terrible, and stupid. Sometimes he laughs with no reason because he is unthinkable when he laughs, he laughs so clearly. It looks scary when he feels happy, he laugs too, but when his mood is sad, he also laughs joyfully too. I think he has a mental problem.
Lydia Jung
ESL writing
Funny Maxwell
He suddenly laughs during the class ,for He thinks about his future marriage. He thinks about his wife ,and romantic life with her. It looks wierd, crazy, terrible, and stupid. Sometimes he laughs with no reason because he is unthinkable when he laughs, he laughs so clearly. It looks scary when he feels happy, he laugs too, but when his mood is sad, he also laughs joyfully too. I think he has a mental problem.
David Lin 11/22
David Lin
11/22/09
Writing 2A
My Funny classmate
My classmate is a funny guy, he is Maxwell. For example: first, he usually serious says about terror ghost in the class. Second, he looks like nausea gay because he smiles watching Alan and softly touches him. Third, he often remembers marring in the future and with beautiful wife, so he laughs 3 min. Fourth, he romantically and loudly says: “I love you.” to everybody in class everyday. Fifth, he always tells everybody, he is form moon and lives there because he has a rabbit tooth.
11/22/09
Writing 2A
My Funny classmate
My classmate is a funny guy, he is Maxwell. For example: first, he usually serious says about terror ghost in the class. Second, he looks like nausea gay because he smiles watching Alan and softly touches him. Third, he often remembers marring in the future and with beautiful wife, so he laughs 3 min. Fourth, he romantically and loudly says: “I love you.” to everybody in class everyday. Fifth, he always tells everybody, he is form moon and lives there because he has a rabbit tooth.
Sunday, November 22, 2009
Edward Hur 11/22
Edward Hur
November 22, 2009
ESL Writing
Maxwell is Funny
I think Maxwell is one of funny guy. First, he suddenly laughs alone. It looks scary. But, he usually makes us happy. Second, he laughs for 5 minutes. That’s unthinkable, and impossible. In addition, his laughing sounds also interesting. Third, he thinks about his marriage. I think he will get good wife because he always talks me funny story. He looks crazy because sometimes, he doing stupid but, he is good classmate for me. He feels happy because he always looks joyful and mood good.
November 22, 2009
ESL Writing
Maxwell is Funny
I think Maxwell is one of funny guy. First, he suddenly laughs alone. It looks scary. But, he usually makes us happy. Second, he laughs for 5 minutes. That’s unthinkable, and impossible. In addition, his laughing sounds also interesting. Third, he thinks about his marriage. I think he will get good wife because he always talks me funny story. He looks crazy because sometimes, he doing stupid but, he is good classmate for me. He feels happy because he always looks joyful and mood good.
Maxwell Wang 11/23/2009
ESL Writing 2A
11/23/2009
Maxwell Wang
My Funny Classmate - Alan
My classmate Alan is funny.For example,he likes to sleep in ESL class,and he always takes out the shoes, his postures are make us to laugh,when he wakes up by Mr. Nakawaga,he slowly said to me: when I was thirsty, I can drink my mouthe water.I'm suriprised and unthinkable,I Think it's very sick.After school,he likes to speak hie nagitive Language,it's diffcult to understand,the prounuciation is strong .After study,he usually goes to my room and sleep with Kevin,I can not stand,and I said :"Are you gay?"he said no,but I don't think so .It's carzy.
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11/23/2009
Maxwell Wang
My Funny Classmate - Alan
My classmate Alan is funny.For example,he likes to sleep in ESL class,and he always takes out the shoes, his postures are make us to laugh,when he wakes up by Mr. Nakawaga,he slowly said to me: when I was thirsty, I can drink my mouthe water.I'm suriprised and unthinkable,I Think it's very sick.After school,he likes to speak hie nagitive Language,it's diffcult to understand,the prounuciation is strong .After study,he usually goes to my room and sleep with Kevin,I can not stand,and I said :"Are you gay?"he said no,but I don't think so .It's carzy.
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Kevin Tseng
writing2A
Kevin Tseng
11/22/09
He usually laughs alone and looks scary and wiard in ESL class. He laughs for 5 minutes. That's very long and unthinkable. In ESL class, he usually thinks about his furture like marrige, dance, and sing, and he also remember something funny like singing loudly in dorm, barking like a dog. When he laughs to others, he feels happy and joyful. Though he looks crazy, he himself does not think so.
Kevin Tseng
11/22/09
He usually laughs alone and looks scary and wiard in ESL class. He laughs for 5 minutes. That's very long and unthinkable. In ESL class, he usually thinks about his furture like marrige, dance, and sing, and he also remember something funny like singing loudly in dorm, barking like a dog. When he laughs to others, he feels happy and joyful. Though he looks crazy, he himself does not think so.
Alan Bai.
Writing 2 A.
Alan Bai.
Funny boy Maxwell
He usually laughed in ESL class, when other people ask him ,"what's funny?" He always say ,"No thing." Then he keeps going. When we have ESL class, He tell me ,"Alan, Yang yang is a best beautiful girl in the word." I think is interesting. Before ESL class, Maxwell always ask me ,"Alan, Let's go to relax." Then we go to bathroom together. In the ESL class, He usually jokes. When he end, Make all the people happy.
When we study in the ESL class, he often touch waist, So I feel very itch, then I'm laughed.
Alan Bai.
Funny boy Maxwell
He usually laughed in ESL class, when other people ask him ,"what's funny?" He always say ,"No thing." Then he keeps going. When we have ESL class, He tell me ,"Alan, Yang yang is a best beautiful girl in the word." I think is interesting. Before ESL class, Maxwell always ask me ,"Alan, Let's go to relax." Then we go to bathroom together. In the ESL class, He usually jokes. When he end, Make all the people happy.
When we study in the ESL class, he often touch waist, So I feel very itch, then I'm laughed.
Yangyang 11/22
Yangyang
11/22/09
writing 2A
I have a funny classmate. When he speaks English very quickly he suddenly speak Chinese, we feel interesting and laughing. When he knows the word means, he always said O, and nodded his head. Sometimes when we go on class he laughs alone, and he is no reason, every laugh will be a long time, we feel are strange and we think he is crazy. When he speaks English his often have some exaggerated expres
exaggerated expression on face. Sometimes he speaks English can has strange tone, it is funny.
11/22/09
writing 2A
I have a funny classmate. When he speaks English very quickly he suddenly speak Chinese, we feel interesting and laughing. When he knows the word means, he always said O, and nodded his head. Sometimes when we go on class he laughs alone, and he is no reason, every laugh will be a long time, we feel are strange and we think he is crazy. When he speaks English his often have some exaggerated expres
exaggerated expression on face. Sometimes he speaks English can has strange tone, it is funny.
Saturday, November 21, 2009
Venus Sun
Venus Sun
Writing2A
11/20/09
Writing2A
11/20/09
Maxwell is funny
He speaks joke for everyone, we feel interested. But it is not really story. He makes our classmate happily. Sometimes he always laughs in class alone; he can laugh 10 minutes, and no reason. We feel queer. He always has big smile on his face. But it is normal day and nothing in class. He speaks strange word such as he says good job when it is not great. So we are not understood. But we are laugh because it is fun to everyone. He has good mood everyday during class. He looks excited and crazy. It is unthinkable for the entire classmate.
Friday, November 20, 2009
David Lin 11/19
David Lin
11/19/09
Writing 2A
Maxwell is Funny
1 He says about ghost story in the class.
Usually
Serious
Terror
2 He looks like a gay because he watches Alan and touches him.
Nausea
Smile
Softly
3 He laughs in the class.
Often
Remember
10 second
4 He says I love you to every body.
Romantic
Loudly
Everyday
5 He tells everybody: he is form moon.
Always
Live
Tooth
11/19/09
Writing 2A
Maxwell is Funny
1 He says about ghost story in the class.
Usually
Serious
Terror
2 He looks like a gay because he watches Alan and touches him.
Nausea
Smile
Softly
3 He laughs in the class.
Often
Remember
10 second
4 He says I love you to every body.
Romantic
Loudly
Everyday
5 He tells everybody: he is form moon.
Always
Live
Tooth
Thursday, November 19, 2009
Alan Bai. Nov.19
Writing 2 A.
Alan Bai.
Funny boy Maxwell
He usually laughed in ESL class, when other people ask him ,"what's funny?" He always say ,"No thing." Then he keeps going.
Talk
Say
Simile
2. When we have ESL class, He tell me ,"Alan, Yang yang is a best beautiful girl in the word." I think is interesting.
Lady
favorite
Special
3. Before ESL class, Maxwell always ask me ,"Alan, Let's go to relax." Then we go to bathroom together.
Funny
Laughed
cute
4. In the ESL class, He usually jokes. When he end, Make all the people happy.
Exciting
Hobby
Feeling
5. When we study in the ESL class, he often touch waist, So I feel very itch, then I'm laughed.
Gay
Girl
sick
Alan Bai.
Funny boy Maxwell
He usually laughed in ESL class, when other people ask him ,"what's funny?" He always say ,"No thing." Then he keeps going.
Talk
Say
Simile
2. When we have ESL class, He tell me ,"Alan, Yang yang is a best beautiful girl in the word." I think is interesting.
Lady
favorite
Special
3. Before ESL class, Maxwell always ask me ,"Alan, Let's go to relax." Then we go to bathroom together.
Funny
Laughed
cute
4. In the ESL class, He usually jokes. When he end, Make all the people happy.
Exciting
Hobby
Feeling
5. When we study in the ESL class, he often touch waist, So I feel very itch, then I'm laughed.
Gay
Girl
sick
Edward Hur 11/19
Edward Hur
November 19, 2009
ESL Writing
1. Maxwell said good job when I said bad ward.
Funny
Out of rule
Surprise
2. He told everybody that Alan is from moon in serious face
Interesting
Strange
Absurdity
3. He says “I love you” to boy
Suddenly
Quickly
Fast
4. He laughs alone
Scary
Loud
Imagine
5. He usually says funny story
Good
Cool
Quietly
November 19, 2009
ESL Writing
1. Maxwell said good job when I said bad ward.
Funny
Out of rule
Surprise
2. He told everybody that Alan is from moon in serious face
Interesting
Strange
Absurdity
3. He says “I love you” to boy
Suddenly
Quickly
Fast
4. He laughs alone
Scary
Loud
Imagine
5. He usually says funny story
Good
Cool
Quietly
Maxwell Wang 11/19/2009
ESL Wring 2A
11/19/2009
Maxwell Wang
1. He said:”when I was thirsty, I can drink my mouth water.”
Sick
Unthinkable
Useful idea
2. He always sleeps with Kevin in on bed.
Crazy
Gay
Can not stand
3. His dialect is different from Chinese.
Strong
Difficult to understand
Special
4. He always sleeps in class, and his postures are make us to laugh.
Bad hobbits
Snore
Take out the shoes
5. He always shouts when Mr.Nakagava not been class
Rude
Kids
Young
11/19/2009
Maxwell Wang
1. He said:”when I was thirsty, I can drink my mouth water.”
Sick
Unthinkable
Useful idea
2. He always sleeps with Kevin in on bed.
Crazy
Gay
Can not stand
3. His dialect is different from Chinese.
Strong
Difficult to understand
Special
4. He always sleeps in class, and his postures are make us to laugh.
Bad hobbits
Snore
Take out the shoes
5. He always shouts when Mr.Nakagava not been class
Rude
Kids
Young
Yangyang 11/19
1 When he speaks English very quickly he suddenly speaks Chinese, we feel interesting.
quickly
suddenly
interesting
2 When he knows the word means, he always said O, and nodded his head.
always
nodded
word
3 Sometimes when we go on class he laughs alone, and he is no reason, we feel are strange.
alone
reason
strange
4 When he speaks English his often have some exaggerated expression on face.
exa
4 When he speaks English his often have some exaggerated expression on face.
exaggerated
expression
face
5 Sometimes he speaks English can has strange tone, it is funny.
tone
funny
strange
quickly
suddenly
interesting
2 When he knows the word means, he always said O, and nodded his head.
always
nodded
word
3 Sometimes when we go on class he laughs alone, and he is no reason, we feel are strange.
alone
reason
strange
4 When he speaks English his often have some exaggerated expression on face.
exa
4 When he speaks English his often have some exaggerated expression on face.
exaggerated
expression
face
5 Sometimes he speaks English can has strange tone, it is funny.
tone
funny
strange
kevvin Tseng11/19
writing2A
kevin Tseng
11/19/09
1.He always says strange words to I and others
do not understand
odd
surprise
2. He always say "do you want to die" to everybody and everybody always says "Yes" to him.
crazy
interesting
fascinating
3.He always touches Alan's head and says" you are so hamesome so that I love you so much" to Alan
lie
gay
feel sick
4.When a teacher asks a question, he always "what?" many times and we will laugh at him.
cute
laughable
ridiculous
5.When he laugh, his face is always funny and terrible.
overstate
exciting
special
kevin Tseng
11/19/09
1.He always says strange words to I and others
do not understand
odd
surprise
2. He always say "do you want to die" to everybody and everybody always says "Yes" to him.
crazy
interesting
fascinating
3.He always touches Alan's head and says" you are so hamesome so that I love you so much" to Alan
lie
gay
feel sick
4.When a teacher asks a question, he always "what?" many times and we will laugh at him.
cute
laughable
ridiculous
5.When he laugh, his face is always funny and terrible.
overstate
exciting
special
Raymundo 11/19
MaxWell¨
He have very humorous speech.
-Pronunciation
-Bad English
-Joined
He speech suddenly.
-Rare words
-Graceful phrase
-Without sense
He very fast speech.
-Graceful
-Fast
-Do not understand
When he speaks very hard, He almost shouts.
-Shouts
-Strong
-Scandalous
Sometimes He look like a crazy present,but he´s funny.
-Famous
- Optimistic
-Arrogant
He have very humorous speech.
-Pronunciation
-Bad English
-Joined
He speech suddenly.
-Rare words
-Graceful phrase
-Without sense
He very fast speech.
-Graceful
-Fast
-Do not understand
When he speaks very hard, He almost shouts.
-Shouts
-Strong
-Scandalous
Sometimes He look like a crazy present,but he´s funny.
-Famous
- Optimistic
-Arrogant
Venus Sun
Venus Sun
11/19/09
Writing2A
1. He speaks joke for everyone, we feel interested. But it is not really story.
Interested
Really
Story
2. He always laughs in class alone; he can laugh 10 minutes, and no reason.
Reason
10minutes
Alone
3. He always has big smile on his face. But it is normal day and nothing in class.
Nothing
Big
Normal
4. He speaks strange word. So we are not understood. But we are laugh.
Not
Understand
Laugh
5. He has good mood everyday. He looks excited and crazy. It is unthinkable.
excited
crazy
unthinkable
11/19/09
Writing2A
1. He speaks joke for everyone, we feel interested. But it is not really story.
Interested
Really
Story
2. He always laughs in class alone; he can laugh 10 minutes, and no reason.
Reason
10minutes
Alone
3. He always has big smile on his face. But it is normal day and nothing in class.
Nothing
Big
Normal
4. He speaks strange word. So we are not understood. But we are laugh.
Not
Understand
Laugh
5. He has good mood everyday. He looks excited and crazy. It is unthinkable.
excited
crazy
unthinkable
Wednesday, November 18, 2009
My Friend
David Lin
11/17/09
Writing 2A
My Friend
He is crazy.
He always does his homework in the morning.
He can speak five languages in his life.
He both has two girlfriends in school.
He drives car very fast to go to school in last time.
He usually likes swimming in the winter in the rivers.
He plays basketball.
He always plays basketball with friends in weekend.
He can get many points in the every game.
He plays basketball very well.
He and friends have very good pass ball in the games.
His exercise is playing basketball every day.
He is fond of…
He uses many times play basketball.
He likes to go to China or Taiwan to eat food.
He buys many NBA clothes and put in his bedroom.
He usually sings songs at school.
He very likes to play computer games in the night.
11/17/09
Writing 2A
My Friend
He is crazy.
He always does his homework in the morning.
He can speak five languages in his life.
He both has two girlfriends in school.
He drives car very fast to go to school in last time.
He usually likes swimming in the winter in the rivers.
He plays basketball.
He always plays basketball with friends in weekend.
He can get many points in the every game.
He plays basketball very well.
He and friends have very good pass ball in the games.
His exercise is playing basketball every day.
He is fond of…
He uses many times play basketball.
He likes to go to China or Taiwan to eat food.
He buys many NBA clothes and put in his bedroom.
He usually sings songs at school.
He very likes to play computer games in the night.
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Yangyang
My friend
My friend is a girl. She likes to play the piano, to sing song, to dance, and to play basketball. She is sixteen years old. She has a long and black hair. It is beautiful. She likes to play computer games. Her English is very well. She lives in China now. When I was in China, she was always helping me.
1. She play basketball is better.
Her favorite sport is basketball. She began to do exercise when she was young. She ran 1 hours every day. Her father is a coach. She grew up want to be basketball player. She like to play the basketball because she feels it is interesting and motive. She likes to play basketball with her friends on free time.
2. Her English is better.
She feels English word is interesting. Her mother is a good English teacher. She goes class to listen carefully. She listens to English every morning, and she read English book on free time. She goes to the place to practice speaking English on the weekend. She does not understand questions. She asks her mother, or she finds books. She can do more English practices.
3. She plays the piano is better.
She likes to listen famous piano music when she was young because she feels it is suitable.She began to play the piano when she was six years old. She has taken piano lessons since 10th grade. Her mother can play the piano, so if she doesn’t understand place, she can always ask her mother. She join more piano contests, she won many prices.
My friend is a girl. She likes to play the piano, to sing song, to dance, and to play basketball. She is sixteen years old. She has a long and black hair. It is beautiful. She likes to play computer games. Her English is very well. She lives in China now. When I was in China, she was always helping me.
1. She play basketball is better.
Her favorite sport is basketball. She began to do exercise when she was young. She ran 1 hours every day. Her father is a coach. She grew up want to be basketball player. She like to play the basketball because she feels it is interesting and motive. She likes to play basketball with her friends on free time.
2. Her English is better.
She feels English word is interesting. Her mother is a good English teacher. She goes class to listen carefully. She listens to English every morning, and she read English book on free time. She goes to the place to practice speaking English on the weekend. She does not understand questions. She asks her mother, or she finds books. She can do more English practices.
3. She plays the piano is better.
She likes to listen famous piano music when she was young because she feels it is suitable.She began to play the piano when she was six years old. She has taken piano lessons since 10th grade. Her mother can play the piano, so if she doesn’t understand place, she can always ask her mother. She join more piano contests, she won many prices.
Edward Hur
Edward Hur
November 17, 2009
ESL Writing
My friend name is Eric Choi.
He is also my cousin.
He has lots of American friends in the TMP School.
He can play soccer very well and also he is Varsity.
He speaks English very well.
Sometimes, he helped me what teacher said.
I want to make American friends.
I don’t know how I talk to American friends first.
I can’t talk English well and I usually be shy
I know some American friends. For example, I know Cade, Parker, Gerick, and Healy.
They are usually kind to me.
They always speak English, so I can’t talk with them very well.
My roommate is very helpful
His name is Jay and he is senior.
When I sick, he usually give me some food and medicine.
He buys the water, drinks, and Nacho snack when he goes to Wal-mart.
In the morning, he makes me to wake up early.
If I don’t know grammar he helps me the question.
November 17, 2009
ESL Writing
My friend name is Eric Choi.
He is also my cousin.
He has lots of American friends in the TMP School.
He can play soccer very well and also he is Varsity.
He speaks English very well.
Sometimes, he helped me what teacher said.
I want to make American friends.
I don’t know how I talk to American friends first.
I can’t talk English well and I usually be shy
I know some American friends. For example, I know Cade, Parker, Gerick, and Healy.
They are usually kind to me.
They always speak English, so I can’t talk with them very well.
My roommate is very helpful
His name is Jay and he is senior.
When I sick, he usually give me some food and medicine.
He buys the water, drinks, and Nacho snack when he goes to Wal-mart.
In the morning, he makes me to wake up early.
If I don’t know grammar he helps me the question.
Alan Bai.
Writing 2 A.
Alan Bai.
My friend
My friend is Kevin. He is very helpful. He has so many hobby. He is very cool. Also, if I have question, I also ask him, he usually asks me how to writ it. Sometimes, I'm have fever, Kevin always takes care of me. He usually gives me some advice about study English. On study, if he goes to supermarket, he always help me to by some thing. We are also play basketball in frond of boy dorm. He likes play Ping-pang with me in the boy dorm. Then, he like go for walk very much. On the weekends, We always go for walk at evening. He has short straight hair and big eyes. He has a big nose and big mouth. Ten he is very strong because he always weight lifting in his room at night. So his very handsome. This is my friend Kevin. I like him very much.
Alan Bai.
My friend
My friend is Kevin. He is very helpful. He has so many hobby. He is very cool. Also, if I have question, I also ask him, he usually asks me how to writ it. Sometimes, I'm have fever, Kevin always takes care of me. He usually gives me some advice about study English. On study, if he goes to supermarket, he always help me to by some thing. We are also play basketball in frond of boy dorm. He likes play Ping-pang with me in the boy dorm. Then, he like go for walk very much. On the weekends, We always go for walk at evening. He has short straight hair and big eyes. He has a big nose and big mouth. Ten he is very strong because he always weight lifting in his room at night. So his very handsome. This is my friend Kevin. I like him very much.
Kevin Tseng
writing2A
Kevin Tseng
Kevin Tseng
Alan
He likes to eat
1. He often eat double lunch at school.
2. He usually eat instant noodle before he goes bed.
3. He always eats dinner very much.
4. He sometimes eat many cookies in my room.
5. He usually takes two milks and four cookies at school.
He likes to exercise.
1.He usually play basketball after school.
2.He sometimes go to playground to play basketball on the weekend.
3.He sometimes paly pinpon after dinner.
4.He sometimes play running machine at night.
5.He sometimes does weight-lifting in his room.
He likes to play computer games.
1.He usually play cs with me and Maxwell.
2.He sometimes stay up to play on-line games at midnight.
3.He wants to buy a psp to play ,but he does not have enough money to buy it.
4.his skill of cs is very strong because he usually play it.
5.He sometimes play computer games all the day so he does not do his homework at all.
My Friend
ESL writing
181109
Lydia Jung
She likes to eat
(1)She likes to eat chinese food.
(2)when she wants to eat Korean food, she makes it or find it.
(3)She loves Taco so, If our dinner manu is Taco, she eats a lot
(4)She really cares about eat. When girl's dorm's kitchen was closed for two days, she packed her breakfast , lunch, and dinner.
(5)She likes to eat deliciouse food, so she always wants to eat deliciouse food.
She is kind.
(1)If I don't know about math, she helps me.
(2)When I didn't go to Nation's Hall to eat chinese food , she packed it to give to me
(3)If I have problem, she helps me.
(4)If I'm bored ,I go to her room, and she talks with me even she has homework.
(5)She likes to help RA in the dorm.
She is funny.
(1)If she feels good, she dances well.
(2)She likes to make her freinds laugh by funny stories.
(3)She always has a big smile on her face.
(4)She likes to talk about her life.
(5)She can makes others laugh even though they are the strangers.
181109
Lydia Jung
She likes to eat
(1)She likes to eat chinese food.
(2)when she wants to eat Korean food, she makes it or find it.
(3)She loves Taco so, If our dinner manu is Taco, she eats a lot
(4)She really cares about eat. When girl's dorm's kitchen was closed for two days, she packed her breakfast , lunch, and dinner.
(5)She likes to eat deliciouse food, so she always wants to eat deliciouse food.
She is kind.
(1)If I don't know about math, she helps me.
(2)When I didn't go to Nation's Hall to eat chinese food , she packed it to give to me
(3)If I have problem, she helps me.
(4)If I'm bored ,I go to her room, and she talks with me even she has homework.
(5)She likes to help RA in the dorm.
She is funny.
(1)If she feels good, she dances well.
(2)She likes to make her freinds laugh by funny stories.
(3)She always has a big smile on her face.
(4)She likes to talk about her life.
(5)She can makes others laugh even though they are the strangers.
Journal
Raymundo Hernandez
11-17-09
Writing
My Friend.
Players soccers.
We playing soccer at the team of our communnity. He was the best defense at the team of the school. He always playing with a different shoes in each foot. Sometimes we playing with another teams or schools. We was the best team together, nobody can stop us.
Jokes
He was saying the best jokes. He created to me to laugh much in the school. He learn all about jokes and then he saying to us. Sometimes the jokes was really bad and nobody understand that. But that was the best gift that he has.
Studying in the same school.
We walk every day together to the school.In the school he helped me and I helped him. We taked the lunch together and we talked about our classes. We studied to taked a test and was really good for us because if we have a cuestion about any class, and we helped one to the other.
please check subject-verb agreement, Verb tense, and commas.
please check subject-verb agreement, Verb tense, and commas.
ESL Writing Homework
ESL Writing
17/11/2009
Maxwell
Alan
He likes chatting
1. He often goes to my room to talk with Kevin and me before he goes to bed.
2. He usually surfs the Internet to chat with his friend on weekend.
3. He always talks with his girlfriend and parents for many hours by cell phone.
4. He talks to American every PE class every day.
5. He likes to ask me many questions at study hall.
He is helpful.
1. He will gives money to me when I was run out of money.
2. He always keeps smiling when I asked questions for her.
3. He can help me, for I need to clean the bathroom, although the bathroom was dirty.
4. I like to ask him to bring food from outside when he goes out and he always agrees.
5. He likes to help old man for volunteer on weekends.
He is forgetful
1. He always forgot the homework and ask me before study hall.
2. He lost the money many times when he go out to relax.
3. He sometimes get up late because he forgot he needs to go to school.
4. He can forget the lunch time at school.
5. he also can forget to bring the PE clothes for PE class.
17/11/2009
Maxwell
Alan
He likes chatting
1. He often goes to my room to talk with Kevin and me before he goes to bed.
2. He usually surfs the Internet to chat with his friend on weekend.
3. He always talks with his girlfriend and parents for many hours by cell phone.
4. He talks to American every PE class every day.
5. He likes to ask me many questions at study hall.
He is helpful.
1. He will gives money to me when I was run out of money.
2. He always keeps smiling when I asked questions for her.
3. He can help me, for I need to clean the bathroom, although the bathroom was dirty.
4. I like to ask him to bring food from outside when he goes out and he always agrees.
5. He likes to help old man for volunteer on weekends.
He is forgetful
1. He always forgot the homework and ask me before study hall.
2. He lost the money many times when he go out to relax.
3. He sometimes get up late because he forgot he needs to go to school.
4. He can forget the lunch time at school.
5. he also can forget to bring the PE clothes for PE class.
Venus Sun
Venus Sun
Writing2A
11/18/09
Hobbit
1. She likes eat Chinese and Taiwanese and Korean food.
2. She likes to listen to music of Korean hip hop songs.
3. She likes purple because she thinks it is beauty.
4. She likes play games.
5. She likes Korean drama.
Helpful
1. She is kind, she can help me.
2. When I don’t understand Algebra she has teach me.
3. She picks up the pen, when classmate drops down.
4. She helps me to think journal topic.
5. She helps me take book because I need to go to my locker.
Same school
1. We study in TMP high school.
2. So I meet her in this school.
3. We have same ESL classes.
4. We eat lunch at school.
5. We talk in the school.
Writing2A
11/18/09
Hobbit
1. She likes eat Chinese and Taiwanese and Korean food.
2. She likes to listen to music of Korean hip hop songs.
3. She likes purple because she thinks it is beauty.
4. She likes play games.
5. She likes Korean drama.
Helpful
1. She is kind, she can help me.
2. When I don’t understand Algebra she has teach me.
3. She picks up the pen, when classmate drops down.
4. She helps me to think journal topic.
5. She helps me take book because I need to go to my locker.
Same school
1. We study in TMP high school.
2. So I meet her in this school.
3. We have same ESL classes.
4. We eat lunch at school.
5. We talk in the school.
Edward Hur
Edward Hur
November 17, 2009
ESL Writing
And
Today, I ate breakfast and lunch with students who live in the dorm.
I don’t want to do my grammar homework and writing homework but I have to do it.
So
I didn’t do my homework, so I will do it at night
I’m very hungry and thirsty, so I will stay in the cafeteria and eat dinner.
But
Yesterday, he doesn’t want to go school, but he went to the school.
I already ate the breakfast, but I’m hungry now.
For
I made some cookies for my roommate.
I bought lots of snack for ski trip.
November 17, 2009
ESL Writing
And
Today, I ate breakfast and lunch with students who live in the dorm.
I don’t want to do my grammar homework and writing homework but I have to do it.
So
I didn’t do my homework, so I will do it at night
I’m very hungry and thirsty, so I will stay in the cafeteria and eat dinner.
But
Yesterday, he doesn’t want to go school, but he went to the school.
I already ate the breakfast, but I’m hungry now.
For
I made some cookies for my roommate.
I bought lots of snack for ski trip.
Yangyang
Yangyang
Writing2A
11/18/09
And
1. I am played computer games, and my friend gives me a letter.
2. She cleans room, and I help her wash clothes.
So
1. The wind is too string out side, so I have to stay in my house.
2. He wants to eat dinner, so his mother cooks dinner.
But
1. She likes this dress, but this dress is too big for her.
2. She wants her friend help she do homework, but She wants her friend help she do homework,but her friend is sleeping.
For
1. I didn’t go to school, for I am sick today.
2. I take my friend homework to school, for my friend has a fever.
Writing2A
11/18/09
And
1. I am played computer games, and my friend gives me a letter.
2. She cleans room, and I help her wash clothes.
So
1. The wind is too string out side, so I have to stay in my house.
2. He wants to eat dinner, so his mother cooks dinner.
But
1. She likes this dress, but this dress is too big for her.
2. She wants her friend help she do homework, but She wants her friend help she do homework,but her friend is sleeping.
For
1. I didn’t go to school, for I am sick today.
2. I take my friend homework to school, for my friend has a fever.
Make a sentence
Lydia Jung
ESL writing
181109
And
(1) Chellsey did her home work ,and Sally played computer game all day.
(2)She was playing guitar at school talent show, and he was playing the drum at school talent show.
But
(1)I sas in school to take test again , but my teacher wasn't ther.
(2)I can run fast, but I can't walk fast
So
(1)He was hungry , so he is eating food now.
(2)She droped out from math class ,so she takes art class now.
For
(1)I cooked korean food for chiness visitors wanted eat Krean food.
(2)She cleand school kitchen 3hours for she needed to serve service hours.
ESL writing
181109
And
(1) Chellsey did her home work ,and Sally played computer game all day.
(2)She was playing guitar at school talent show, and he was playing the drum at school talent show.
But
(1)I sas in school to take test again , but my teacher wasn't ther.
(2)I can run fast, but I can't walk fast
So
(1)He was hungry , so he is eating food now.
(2)She droped out from math class ,so she takes art class now.
For
(1)I cooked korean food for chiness visitors wanted eat Krean food.
(2)She cleand school kitchen 3hours for she needed to serve service hours.
Make Sentences
David Lin
11/16/09
Writing 2A
Make sentences
I eat apple, and I do my ESL homework.
Venus studies English and Kevin help her.
I finish going to shopping, but I forget buy drink.
Lydia wants to help Maxwell clean room, Maxwell finishes cleaning room.
I very like to play basketball, so I want to play basketball team.
David doesn’t have tests, so Yangyang studies with him.
I get PP form Mr. Nakagawa, for I sleep in his class.
Ray doesn’t use computer, for Alan takes his computer.
11/16/09
Writing 2A
Make sentences
I eat apple, and I do my ESL homework.
Venus studies English and Kevin help her.
I finish going to shopping, but I forget buy drink.
Lydia wants to help Maxwell clean room, Maxwell finishes cleaning room.
I very like to play basketball, so I want to play basketball team.
David doesn’t have tests, so Yangyang studies with him.
I get PP form Mr. Nakagawa, for I sleep in his class.
Ray doesn’t use computer, for Alan takes his computer.
Monday, November 16, 2009
Kevin
writing2A
Kevin Tseng
1.Venus studys hard, and Kevin studys with her.
Venus eats breakfast, and Kevin drink some milk
2.Lydia likes to sleep, but Maxwell does not like her act.
Lydia got a good grade, but Maxwell Got a terrible grade.
3.David is smart, so YangYang always asks questions
David studys hard, so he can get a good grade.
4.Ray is happy, for Alan says a joke to him.
Ray is angry, for Alan break his cup.
Kevin Tseng
1.Venus studys hard, and Kevin studys with her.
Venus eats breakfast, and Kevin drink some milk
2.Lydia likes to sleep, but Maxwell does not like her act.
Lydia got a good grade, but Maxwell Got a terrible grade.
3.David is smart, so YangYang always asks questions
David studys hard, so he can get a good grade.
4.Ray is happy, for Alan says a joke to him.
Ray is angry, for Alan break his cup.
Alan Bai.
Writing 2 A.
Alan Bai.
1.I'm study in my room, and Kevin sleep in my room.
I'm play basketball, and Kevin watch me.
2.I'm do my homework in my room, but Kevin is sing in my room
Tonny rend English book, but I'm listen music.
3.I go to the bed, so kevin close the light.
I'm study math, so my mother close the TV.
4.I'm remember the word, for ESL test.
I'm play basketball, for make me health.
Alan Bai.
1.I'm study in my room, and Kevin sleep in my room.
I'm play basketball, and Kevin watch me.
2.I'm do my homework in my room, but Kevin is sing in my room
Tonny rend English book, but I'm listen music.
3.I go to the bed, so kevin close the light.
I'm study math, so my mother close the TV.
4.I'm remember the word, for ESL test.
I'm play basketball, for make me health.
ESL Writing 2A
ESL Writing 2A
16/11/2009
Maxwell
I am interested in playing basketball, and I believe in playing basketball can make me strong.
The teacher prohibits from sleeping, and we apologize for doing that.
The teacher blames him for losing his homework, but he has an excuse for losing it.
I am outgoing, but I’m sad today.
I told Alan many times that smoke was not good, so Alan stops smoking.
The dogs are very honest, so they are human’s best friends.
I am accustomed to doing homework early, for I need to do more.
I instead of playing computer game, for I need to take more time to study.
16/11/2009
Maxwell
I am interested in playing basketball, and I believe in playing basketball can make me strong.
The teacher prohibits from sleeping, and we apologize for doing that.
The teacher blames him for losing his homework, but he has an excuse for losing it.
I am outgoing, but I’m sad today.
I told Alan many times that smoke was not good, so Alan stops smoking.
The dogs are very honest, so they are human’s best friends.
I am accustomed to doing homework early, for I need to do more.
I instead of playing computer game, for I need to take more time to study.
Journal
Raymundo Hernandez
11-16-09
Writing 2A
1.-He played the guitar and sang wonderful songs.
It is hard for a student to work and study at the same time.
2.-He spoke clearly, but I didn't understand him.
She saw me, but she didn't recognize me.
3.-Mr. Nakawagá decision will affect all of us, for better or worse.
Edwar paints but he only does it for fun. He doesn't intend to sell his paintings.
4.-We let the door open so that you can get in.
David wasn't exactly drunk, he was a bit tipsy, so to speak.
Venus Sun
Venus Sun
11/16/09
Writing2A
11/16/09
Writing2A
1.
I play game, and I eat candy.
I write homework, and I study test.
2.
I use computer, but I listen to music.
I take pencil, but I draw picture.
3.
I do my work, so I get money.
I buy new cloth, so I wear it.
4.
I open TV, for I watch movie.
I have camera, for take picture.
I play game, and I eat candy.
I write homework, and I study test.
2.
I use computer, but I listen to music.
I take pencil, but I draw picture.
3.
I do my work, so I get money.
I buy new cloth, so I wear it.
4.
I open TV, for I watch movie.
I have camera, for take picture.
David Lin
11/15/09
Writing 2A
My Bedroom
My bedroom usually is very dirty and messy because I don’t have time and I don’t want to clean my bedroom. I don’t change my sheet long time. So, my bed smell is very bad. I often put my clothes on my bed, I sleep with them. I always put my dirty clothes on the floor because I don’t wash them everyday. I work and eat in the table. So, have many homework, book, and food paper on the table. I always can see drink bottle on the table. My garbage always is smell bed and many foods or paper in there because I don’t change it longtime. I want clean my bad bedroom.
Maxwell Advice
You should change the sheet because it looks old and dirty.
You should wash your clothes because they are dirty and smell is bad.
You should put the dirty clothes away because they look confused.
You should recycle the paper because they are too many.
You should take out the garbage because it is full.
Dear Maxwell:
Thank you. You give me good advices. I agree your advices because my bedroom is very dirty and messy. So, I need to clean my bedroom and use your advices. They are good because they can settle my bedroom is bad questions. Thank you again, can you help me clean my bedroom in weekend?
Sunday, November 15, 2009
Raymundo Hernandez
11-14-09
Writing 2A
All my room is neat an organized because i try to clean up everyday.My bed look really comfortable because its everything in order and my pilow always smells good.Inside of my closet, all my shirts and pants are organized.
Somebody daid to me: (Hisae)
-You should put on books on the flower because they show dirty.
-You dont should make on the bed because blanket is droped on the floor.
-You should put on a lot of food during two months because they will smells bad.
Dear Hisae:
Thank you for your advices , however i disagree because i like my room when is clean and smells good .Also i like when everything is organized. See you.!
Edward Hur
Edward Hur
November 15, 2009
ESL Writing
My room is usually dirty and messy because many Korean guys come to the room than eat the noodle. After eating they always order to me what clean the noodle and go away. I don’t like to clean so I usually only wash the table but it looks bad. Sometimes, I and Jay clean the room hardly but we have too many stuff in my room so we can’t clean all stuff. I think we need to remove some stuff. For example, the drink, paper, clothes, and book. It makes messy in my room.
Kevin advice
You should make them eat out because your room is small
You should eat in the cafeteria because it is convenient
You can go another room to eat because you don’t clean your room
You should clean the noodle because the smell of noodle is not good
You should always open the window because it makes smell good
Dear Kevin
Thank you for your advice. I agree with your advice because my room is so small and dirty. So I need to go cafeteria for eat the noodles. In addition, I think open the window idea is very good because it makes to remove the bad smell. But I can’t go another room because if I eat the noodle at other room, I have to clean that noodle. If I don’t clean they will order to me for clean
November 15, 2009
ESL Writing
My room is usually dirty and messy because many Korean guys come to the room than eat the noodle. After eating they always order to me what clean the noodle and go away. I don’t like to clean so I usually only wash the table but it looks bad. Sometimes, I and Jay clean the room hardly but we have too many stuff in my room so we can’t clean all stuff. I think we need to remove some stuff. For example, the drink, paper, clothes, and book. It makes messy in my room.
Kevin advice
You should make them eat out because your room is small
You should eat in the cafeteria because it is convenient
You can go another room to eat because you don’t clean your room
You should clean the noodle because the smell of noodle is not good
You should always open the window because it makes smell good
Dear Kevin
Thank you for your advice. I agree with your advice because my room is so small and dirty. So I need to go cafeteria for eat the noodles. In addition, I think open the window idea is very good because it makes to remove the bad smell. But I can’t go another room because if I eat the noodle at other room, I have to clean that noodle. If I don’t clean they will order to me for clean
151109Lydia Jung
ESL writing
My Room
My Room
My room is massy because I don't like clean my room everyday. I clean my room once a week. Also, I bought Kimchi in wichita and I keep kimchi in my room so it is little bit smelly. I tried open the windows and spray air cleaner but it wasn't work. My bed is for two people but I don't have roomate so I brought down bed from second floor to the floor. It's really usefull. Nowdays I always doing homwork and study on floor bed because My desk is very massy so I don't use my desk. After I use something such as, dryer, pens, book, and some bottles, I put those things on my desk and drawer. I put my uniforms on my chairs so my room looks massy, but my room is not dirty. I rub up my room's floor once a weeck and I sweep off floor almost everyday.
Allen's advice to me
1) You need to clean your room twice a week.
2)If you want eat something, eat food out of your room.
3)Put your clothes in drawer after you changed clothes.
4)You should open the window and the door during the you eat something in your room.
5)Put your shose in drawer and chair.
Dear Allen
Thank you for advice . I agree with you and I did whole things what you adviced to me then my room is not massy. Also, I don't eat Kimchi in my room any more and it was works my room smells good now. Thank you Allen very much.
Yangyang
Yang yang
Writing2A
11/15/09
Writing2A
11/15/09
My room
My room is small, but it is clean. Because I live in this on room with other people. We have clean room every Sunday. Every Sunday clean room, we can wash drizzly clothes, trash clean floor and desk. I can open the windows, so the air is fresh. I bought a laundry basket, Put dirty clothes on the inside. Because ties will make my room more orderly.
Advises
1. You should not clean your room because it looks like nobody live here.
2. You should put your clothes everywhere because it is nothing in room.
3. You should not trough your trash away because if you do it your room will be smelling.
4. You should not clean your room every day because it is quickly to make dirt.
5. You should not put your book on the desk because it can put in book anywhere.
My room is small, but it is clean. Because I live in this on room with other people. We have clean room every Sunday. Every Sunday clean room, we can wash drizzly clothes, trash clean floor and desk. I can open the windows, so the air is fresh. I bought a laundry basket, Put dirty clothes on the inside. Because ties will make my room more orderly.
Advises
1. You should not clean your room because it looks like nobody live here.
2. You should put your clothes everywhere because it is nothing in room.
3. You should not trough your trash away because if you do it your room will be smelling.
4. You should not clean your room every day because it is quickly to make dirt.
5. You should not put your book on the desk because it can put in book anywhere.
E-mail
Dear Venus,
Thank you for your adviceS. You tell me not clean my room because it looks like nobody live here. Put your clothes everywhere because it is nothing in room. Not clean your room everyday because it is quickly to make dirt. Not trough your trash away because if my do it my room will be smelling. Not put your book on the desk because it can out in book anywhere. Thank you for you tells me. But I like my room tidy you give me a proposal that I think will make my room upheavals. I don’t like.
Dear Venus,
Thank you for your adviceS. You tell me not clean my room because it looks like nobody live here. Put your clothes everywhere because it is nothing in room. Not clean your room everyday because it is quickly to make dirt. Not trough your trash away because if my do it my room will be smelling. Not put your book on the desk because it can out in book anywhere. Thank you for you tells me. But I like my room tidy you give me a proposal that I think will make my room upheavals. I don’t like.
Dear David:
First,Thanks your advices,I agree all of your advices,I will buy a basket to put my dirty clothess.It can make my room look better.You said I should buy a box for my computer lines.On weekends,I bought a small shelf for shoes,this idea also is one of your advices.I did it and put the shoes on the small shelf.Now,my room look much better.I think it is almost neat.Thanks your adceces .Could you give me more ideas?
Maxwell
11/09/2009
Kevin
Writing2A
Kevin Tseng
My room
My room is messy and small. When I take of my clothes, I usually put my dirty clothes anywhere like bed, desk, and closet. I sometimes drink milk in my room and drop it to the trash can. When the time is passing a moment, my room will smell terrible. My room now is messy and dirty, so I decision I will clean my room this weekend.
Advice: 1. You should take all clothes in the closet because if you do not take them, they will look bad.
2. You should drink milk in the cafeteria because if you drink in the room, the
room will smell terrible.
3. You should clean your trash can every time because trash can make your room smell bad.
4. You should take a shower after you play basketball. If you do not do it, you will smell terrible.
E-mail
Dear Edward
Thank you for your advices, I agree with your advices. I think I really will clean my room. My room now smells and looks terrible. I will never drink milk in my room because not only my roommate will be angry but also my room will smell bad and terrible. If I do not clean my room, I and my roommate maybe will get sick and be uncomfortable. After you give me these good advices, I will do them hard and make my room clean.
Kevin Tseng
My room
My room is messy and small. When I take of my clothes, I usually put my dirty clothes anywhere like bed, desk, and closet. I sometimes drink milk in my room and drop it to the trash can. When the time is passing a moment, my room will smell terrible. My room now is messy and dirty, so I decision I will clean my room this weekend.
Advice: 1. You should take all clothes in the closet because if you do not take them, they will look bad.
2. You should drink milk in the cafeteria because if you drink in the room, the
room will smell terrible.
3. You should clean your trash can every time because trash can make your room smell bad.
4. You should take a shower after you play basketball. If you do not do it, you will smell terrible.
Dear Edward
Thank you for your advices, I agree with your advices. I think I really will clean my room. My room now smells and looks terrible. I will never drink milk in my room because not only my roommate will be angry but also my room will smell bad and terrible. If I do not clean my room, I and my roommate maybe will get sick and be uncomfortable. After you give me these good advices, I will do them hard and make my room clean.
Venus Sun
Venus SunWriting2A
11/15/09
My room is clean
My room is clean because I put my books very neat. My room smell is fresh because I through away the trash when trash is full. I always listen to music on computer. It is make me fun. It is my room noise. My room looks so many stuff of pencil and computer and paper, printer, CD, chair. But I have put in good place for them. So it is clean. Sometimes I map my room and sweep my room.
Advice:
1. You should not often through away the trash because that room smell is not fresh.
2. You should not put your books very neat because you should study, if your book put neat, you don’t have every time study.
3. When you listen to music on computer, you should put loud music and open radio because it can make very good noise.
4. You should not map your room because it can make you tired.
5. You should not sweep your room because it is not fun.
E-mail:
Dear Yang yang, thank you for yours advices. However, I disagree with your advices because if I don’t have through away the trash, it can make my room bad smell. So I need to through away trash everyday. My books always put in book bag because I don’t need to use. So I put in my book bag. I think if I open music on computer and listen radio together. It can make me dizzy. So I just open music on computer because I can use it. I need to map my room sometimes because I feel my room is dirty, and I need to sweep my room because I feel my room has a lot trash in floor.
Alan Bai.
Writing 2 A.
Alan Bai.
My room
My room have a little messy and dirty. I always drink water when i finish I never trash. So I have so many bottle. I also put my clothes, backpack and anything at bed , desk, floor, chair and any where. I hardly ever to clean the floor. So my room have a little messy and dirty.
Advice
You need trash your bottle after you drink water because if you not trash your bottle it make messy your room. Put your clothes in the drawer because it can makes your roommate get mad. Put backpack under your desk it will be good for your study. Clean your floor by cleaner because if you not clean insects go to your room.
Thanks
Thanks for your advice, I agree with you because it can make me health. First, When i finish my drinking, I can trash the bottle. Then I will out my clothes in the drawer. Next, I should out my backpack under my desk. Finally, I can also cleam my floor. So thinks your advice.
Alan Bai.
My room
My room have a little messy and dirty. I always drink water when i finish I never trash. So I have so many bottle. I also put my clothes, backpack and anything at bed , desk, floor, chair and any where. I hardly ever to clean the floor. So my room have a little messy and dirty.
Advice
You need trash your bottle after you drink water because if you not trash your bottle it make messy your room. Put your clothes in the drawer because it can makes your roommate get mad. Put backpack under your desk it will be good for your study. Clean your floor by cleaner because if you not clean insects go to your room.
Thanks
Thanks for your advice, I agree with you because it can make me health. First, When i finish my drinking, I can trash the bottle. Then I will out my clothes in the drawer. Next, I should out my backpack under my desk. Finally, I can also cleam my floor. So thinks your advice.
Friday, November 13, 2009
Edward Hur
Edward Hur
November 13, 2009
ESL Writing
1. On Christmas day is the most important day for me because I stayed my house with family and grandparents last year. First, my family and I went to the grandparents for make special food. We ate lunch in the meat restaurant because my family is too many and that day is one of special day. After lunch, we came back to the grandparent’s house. Then we went to the church where near to my house because many events in the church.
2. New Year day is important day for me because I got the money from parents, grandparents, cousin, aunt, and other people. When I went to my aunt’s house I talked with them because it made me feeling happy and interesting. Then we went to the grave for the relations. At that place we did the deep bow and perform an ancestral sacrifice. The last time, we met the relations and parting.
3. My birthday is important day for me. The last birthday, my family and I went to the eating house for my birthday and then we ordered the various kind of food. For example, we ate meat, pulgogi, and roasted ribs. It was very delicious. After lunch we went to “Artist”. It is the cake shop. We joined that shop and then I chose chocolate cake. Next, we went to grandparent’s house. First, we sang the “happy birthday” song with my family. Then we divided the piece of chocolate cake and we ate it. Finally, we came back to my house. I think we spend the great day.
November 13, 2009
ESL Writing
1. On Christmas day is the most important day for me because I stayed my house with family and grandparents last year. First, my family and I went to the grandparents for make special food. We ate lunch in the meat restaurant because my family is too many and that day is one of special day. After lunch, we came back to the grandparent’s house. Then we went to the church where near to my house because many events in the church.
2. New Year day is important day for me because I got the money from parents, grandparents, cousin, aunt, and other people. When I went to my aunt’s house I talked with them because it made me feeling happy and interesting. Then we went to the grave for the relations. At that place we did the deep bow and perform an ancestral sacrifice. The last time, we met the relations and parting.
3. My birthday is important day for me. The last birthday, my family and I went to the eating house for my birthday and then we ordered the various kind of food. For example, we ate meat, pulgogi, and roasted ribs. It was very delicious. After lunch we went to “Artist”. It is the cake shop. We joined that shop and then I chose chocolate cake. Next, we went to grandparent’s house. First, we sang the “happy birthday” song with my family. Then we divided the piece of chocolate cake and we ate it. Finally, we came back to my house. I think we spend the great day.
Three Important Days
David Lin
11/12/09
Writing 2A
Three Important Days
My first important day is my birthday because it is very specially. I am so lucky. My aunt, aunt’s son and my birthdays in same day. So, I never forget my birthday. We have a big birthday party for us every year. I can get many gifts and ate many delicious Chinese foods. Another important is Chinese New year because it is very happiness. For example: My all families come back hometown eat many Chinese foods together. I can get many lucky money forms my family. We toke about last year anything and played with families. Last important day is my country National Day because it is very free. For example: I don’t have school and I can do anything in that day. I can go to watch raising a flag in that day morning. I can with my family or friends go to shopping because anything has on sale. I can play fireworks in the night. That is very beautiful in the sky. I very like this day. I think this day important for all Chinese people.
11/12/09
Writing 2A
Three Important Days
My first important day is my birthday because it is very specially. I am so lucky. My aunt, aunt’s son and my birthdays in same day. So, I never forget my birthday. We have a big birthday party for us every year. I can get many gifts and ate many delicious Chinese foods. Another important is Chinese New year because it is very happiness. For example: My all families come back hometown eat many Chinese foods together. I can get many lucky money forms my family. We toke about last year anything and played with families. Last important day is my country National Day because it is very free. For example: I don’t have school and I can do anything in that day. I can go to watch raising a flag in that day morning. I can with my family or friends go to shopping because anything has on sale. I can play fireworks in the night. That is very beautiful in the sky. I very like this day. I think this day important for all Chinese people.
Thursday, November 12, 2009
kevin Tseng
writing2A
Kevin Tseng
11/12/09
Kevin Tseng
11/12/09
Three important days
my important day is my birthday because I can receive many gifts and some people will say "happy birthday" to me. In that time, my parents and me will also go out to eat high-level restaurant.My another important day is Chinese new year. In that time, I can get some money and can play big two with my uncle, aunt, parents, grandmother, cousins and neighbor. Sometimes we all will go out to play. Example, once we go to the mountain to eat some snacks and look night scene. We all are happy and fun. The last important day is beyond the year. In that time I can go to Taipei 101 to see the consert at midnight. Many people are there. It is very busy and crowded. I also can see many singers there. when the time is going to be tomorrow, we an see the fire on the sky. It is beautiful. I think the three days are my favorite day in my life.
Yangyang
Yangyang
11/12/09
Writing 2A
My important day is the New Year. Because every time takes the New Year I will go to my grandfather house. My grandfather lives in the countryside. Each New Year is very busy, we can hang color papers, Hang lantern and firecrackers. All family will be together eat dumplings, see a Spring Festival Party on TV, and I have a lot of sugar, collect a lot of money and wear new clothes. That is my favori
That is my favorite day. Because I feel very happy and joy.
11/12/09
Writing 2A
My important day is the New Year. Because every time takes the New Year I will go to my grandfather house. My grandfather lives in the countryside. Each New Year is very busy, we can hang color papers, Hang lantern and firecrackers. All family will be together eat dumplings, see a Spring Festival Party on TV, and I have a lot of sugar, collect a lot of money and wear new clothes. That is my favori
That is my favorite day. Because I feel very happy and joy.
ESL Writing Homework
ESL Writing 2A
11/12/2009
Maxwell
National day is important for me because I born in China. I have been there hour 17years make me really china. So when this day comes, I will go to Beijing to watch Flag-raising at Tina An Men. This Flag-raising is different, there are about 100 thounds people to watch. So this day is important for every Chinese.
Early April is important because I need to go to the cemetery for my grandparents. I need to clean it and put the floor on the ground.
My parents’ birthday is important for me. In normal time, I want to do something for them, such as wash their clothes, massage for them and wash their feet, but I will shy. When their birthday comes, I can do that.
11/12/2009
Maxwell
National day is important for me because I born in China. I have been there hour 17years make me really china. So when this day comes, I will go to Beijing to watch Flag-raising at Tina An Men. This Flag-raising is different, there are about 100 thounds people to watch. So this day is important for every Chinese.
Early April is important because I need to go to the cemetery for my grandparents. I need to clean it and put the floor on the ground.
My parents’ birthday is important for me. In normal time, I want to do something for them, such as wash their clothes, massage for them and wash their feet, but I will shy. When their birthday comes, I can do that.
Alan Bai.
Writing 2 A.
Alan Bai.
The important day for me
The best important day is new year day because I can live with my family and play with them. I usually play basketball with my uncle and brother and eat food together. Then I can get money. I'm very happy. Then the birthday is very important day for me because in 1993 this day I was born.Always, I can get gift from my parents. So this is very important day for me. Then the children day is very important day for me because every this day I can remember when I was a little child. Then I can play any game with my friend like a child. So I also feel very happy. I like those festivals.
Alan Bai.
The important day for me
The best important day is new year day because I can live with my family and play with them. I usually play basketball with my uncle and brother and eat food together. Then I can get money. I'm very happy. Then the birthday is very important day for me because in 1993 this day I was born.Always, I can get gift from my parents. So this is very important day for me. Then the children day is very important day for me because every this day I can remember when I was a little child. Then I can play any game with my friend like a child. So I also feel very happy. I like those festivals.
Lydia Jung
121109
ESL writing
Lydia Jung
Day that Special to Me
First day that special to me is New Year day because that day makes me feels diffirent and I need to change something my badhabits such as don't be lazy, do exercise for my health and lose my fat. Also, my whole family gether round at mt home and we eat food than we talk to each other long time. During the New Year's hollydays, I can watch many spcial things on TV such as, show programs , singers competition and movies. It makes me happy.
Second is My birthday, My birthday is the day that just for me so it's really especial to me. My all friends and family care about me specialy. For example, they gave me birth day presents , they give me letters, they make foods for me , they really kind to me while that day and they sing for me. My birthday makes me can feel my family's and friend's love and true heart.
Third one is Chusuck (Korean thangs giving day) because my mother is really good at cook so If she make some Korean traditinal food, it tast really delicious and Chusuck is the day that she makes many deliciouse food. Also, Chusuck is very long holyday, it's almost two weeks so I can took a rest long time with my mother's deliciouse foods. I can meet My family who lives far from my house and they stay my house three or fourdays so I can play with them long time.
ESL writing
Lydia Jung
Day that Special to Me
First day that special to me is New Year day because that day makes me feels diffirent and I need to change something my badhabits such as don't be lazy, do exercise for my health and lose my fat. Also, my whole family gether round at mt home and we eat food than we talk to each other long time. During the New Year's hollydays, I can watch many spcial things on TV such as, show programs , singers competition and movies. It makes me happy.
Second is My birthday, My birthday is the day that just for me so it's really especial to me. My all friends and family care about me specialy. For example, they gave me birth day presents , they give me letters, they make foods for me , they really kind to me while that day and they sing for me. My birthday makes me can feel my family's and friend's love and true heart.
Third one is Chusuck (Korean thangs giving day) because my mother is really good at cook so If she make some Korean traditinal food, it tast really delicious and Chusuck is the day that she makes many deliciouse food. Also, Chusuck is very long holyday, it's almost two weeks so I can took a rest long time with my mother's deliciouse foods. I can meet My family who lives far from my house and they stay my house three or fourdays so I can play with them long time.
Journal
Raymundo Hernandez
11-12-09
Writing 2A
Remembering an important day.
-Independence Day in Mexico
El Grito every 16th of September is the Mexican Fiesta par excellence! On this day Mexicans all over the world celebrate Mexico’s independence from Spanish rule.And this is the moment that every 16th of September is re enacted in every plaza or zócalo of Mexico, and commemorated by Mexicans all over the world.
Streets, houses, buildings and cars are decorated everywhere in the country. On every street corner there are vendors selling flags, balloons, sombreros and rehiletes -shuttlecock, all with the green, white and red, our National Colors.
Streets, houses, buildings and cars are decorated everywhere in the country. On every street corner there are vendors selling flags, balloons, sombreros and rehiletes -shuttlecock, all with the green, white and red, our National Colors.
-Christmas In Mexico
On Noche Buena, December 24,everyone goes to their respective homes to have dinner with family and any friend who does not have a family is always welcome to be part of a family celebration.After all then it comes the party for the children. There will be a Piñata,filled with peanuts in the shell, oranges, tangerines, sugar canes, and seldom wrapped hard candy. Of course, there will be other types of chants the children will sing while the child in turn is trying to break the Piñata.
-BirthDay Celebration.
In addition to parties, it is common for people to receive gifts on their birthdays or surprise parties. The popular gifts include toys, books, jewellery, clothes, flowers, techical devices, etc. However, sometimes it is expected of the person celebrating their birthday to treat their party guests instead; this varies depending on the local culture and may involve party gifts or other gestures, for example inviting to the restaurant or bar (some of them offer special birthday programs), arranging party at home, or at work.
My Mother Told Me Old House
David Lin
11/11/09
Writing 2A
My Mother Told Old house
Many years ago, my mother told me her lived in her old house. For example: The house was on the small mountain in my hometown at my mother was kid. It was between two apple trees. She said usually played below there in summer and sat on the tree slept above. The house was next to a well. She used the water to give vegetables. The house near had her grew a little vegetables. She had a cave behind the house. She always putted food inside and save goods in there. I go to there find many time, but I never see the house.
11/11/09
Writing 2A
My Mother Told Old house
Many years ago, my mother told me her lived in her old house. For example: The house was on the small mountain in my hometown at my mother was kid. It was between two apple trees. She said usually played below there in summer and sat on the tree slept above. The house was next to a well. She used the water to give vegetables. The house near had her grew a little vegetables. She had a cave behind the house. She always putted food inside and save goods in there. I go to there find many time, but I never see the house.
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
Edward Hur
Edward Hur
November 11, 2009
ESL Writing
My Parents Told Me Study Hard
They always told me study hard when I in the Korea because they was worrying me since elementary school but I usually played computer game. Sometimes, I studied homework near the parents. Then I sat on my desk next to my younger sister desk. After study I ate delicious snack where behind me because I was board. Then I played soccer between the apartment and the school at afternoon. I am proud of that day because I did lots of homework
November 11, 2009
ESL Writing
My Parents Told Me Study Hard
They always told me study hard when I in the Korea because they was worrying me since elementary school but I usually played computer game. Sometimes, I studied homework near the parents. Then I sat on my desk next to my younger sister desk. After study I ate delicious snack where behind me because I was board. Then I played soccer between the apartment and the school at afternoon. I am proud of that day because I did lots of homework
Yangyang
Yangyang
11/11/09
Writing 2A
My mother told me to take everything seriously . Even if this matter is very simple, I have taken seriously. Once I made math questions and these questions were in simple, I quickly finished these questions. When my mother told me to check homework and a lot of mistakes, I do again. After I became serious again, I found a lot of mistakes. When I found, I carefully did everything better. So I caref
So I carefully do everything at first now.
11/11/09
Writing 2A
My mother told me to take everything seriously . Even if this matter is very simple, I have taken seriously. Once I made math questions and these questions were in simple, I quickly finished these questions. When my mother told me to check homework and a lot of mistakes, I do again. After I became serious again, I found a lot of mistakes. When I found, I carefully did everything better. So I caref
So I carefully do everything at first now.
Alan Bai.
Writing 2 A.
Alan Bai.
My parents tell me
My parents also tell me something because they worry about me. When I was in the china, they always asked me so many question. For example, my father usually told me "If today is rain, you can't sit behind tree", "You can't smoke in the school", "You can't put your money on the desk", and "You can't be near from bad students." I usually answered him, "Ok, I understood." After my father, my mother told me, "You must study hard", "After school, you need to do your homework at home", "You should make your grade between 80 and 100", and "You have to be above other people." Then I said, "Ok, I can do better, please believe me." Although, they were very annoying, but I'm very happy because this is their love.
Alan Bai.
My parents tell me
My parents also tell me something because they worry about me. When I was in the china, they always asked me so many question. For example, my father usually told me "If today is rain, you can't sit behind tree", "You can't smoke in the school", "You can't put your money on the desk", and "You can't be near from bad students." I usually answered him, "Ok, I understood." After my father, my mother told me, "You must study hard", "After school, you need to do your homework at home", "You should make your grade between 80 and 100", and "You have to be above other people." Then I said, "Ok, I can do better, please believe me." Although, they were very annoying, but I'm very happy because this is their love.
ESL Writing Homework11/11/2009
ESL Writing 2A
11/11/2009
Maxwell
MY parents teach me how to grow up.
My parents usually told me I can or can not do when I was a kid.
On time, I went to a building to play with other kids, and the building was not finished. I am below the base building, two kids are next to me, and I between them. On kid was above the base building because we were playing hide-and-seek. We sat on the ground and waiting for the finder. The finder was near us, we were nervous. Of course, the finder found us at last. We were happy. After that, I went back to home and told my parents what I did, I was surprise because they were not only happy, but also angry and hit me. They said:”We told you many times, do not go there. The building is not finished and it is behind the bush, it like corner, there are many bad people at the building, they do not have home and work. Do not go there!! ”
kevin Tseng
writing2A
Kevin Tseng
11/11/09
Kevin Tseng
11/11/09
My parents told me something
My parents told me I should studied English hard before I came to the U.S.A.to study. when I came to the U.S.A., I should used English to live. If I can not understand English, I can not live without English in the U.S.A. I also can not study very well. My parents also told me I should learned independence. For example, I often do not clean my house so my mother often help me clean it. my mom sometimes help me clean my clothes. When I came to the U.S.A.,my mom can not help me do anything. I should do anything by myself. I think it is important to me to learn about it.
Journal
Raymundo Hernandez
11-11-09
Writing 2A
-What My Parents Say.
-What they say on my education in the school.They living in Mexico City.Once they wrote in a letter some ideas that i must make to improve in the school.I follow those ideas because my mom is a women of extraordinary intellingence, and behind my mom is my dad who always be on work.Then they will come at Christmas on December 31st-2009,in the winter ,they will come in USA and they will be there in almost 2 months.
Speak English out of School
111109
Lydia Jung
ESL writing
I speak English with my korean freinds because we went to improving our English. If I speak with them by English, I learn many things from them such as , weird, hang out, starving and even, and I can learn what is diffirent between Korean and English. Also, I speak English with friends who are from other contries such as, Venus from taiwan, MiMi from Japan , YangYang from china and RAs from America. We can only speak English to each other so It makes me think and speak English natually. In my opinion , speaking English with someone who can speak English better than me is the most easy and good way for me to learn English skills well.
Lydia Jung
ESL writing
I speak English with my korean freinds because we went to improving our English. If I speak with them by English, I learn many things from them such as , weird, hang out, starving and even, and I can learn what is diffirent between Korean and English. Also, I speak English with friends who are from other contries such as, Venus from taiwan, MiMi from Japan , YangYang from china and RAs from America. We can only speak English to each other so It makes me think and speak English natually. In my opinion , speaking English with someone who can speak English better than me is the most easy and good way for me to learn English skills well.
Venus
Venus Sun
11/11/09
Writing2A
11/11/09
Writing2A
My parents tell me don’t late in the school
My parents tell me don’t be late in the school. For example, my home is near to school. So I always wake up at 7:15 am. The school is between gym and program. It is behind program. My father drive me to school just need fifteen minutes. It is very quickly to school. So I am not always late in school. When I go to the school. I always go on to three floors because my homeroom is in there. I go to first hour and next to classroom, and near my locker. So I am not late in class. When school is bell ring. I go to next hour is below in gym. I am listen to my parents don’t be late in school. I have quickly to ready for school.
Useing English Outside of Class
David Lin
11/10/09
Writing 2A
Using English Outside of Class
I have been studying English two years, but I don’t use it in outside of the ESL class. Now, I find we need to use it in life and it is very important. For example: we need to speak it in school any where. We do anything with America people only speak English can help us to easy finish working. We listening teacher’s question and think a little time and answer it in the school. Here is using English for any things. We go to shopping, if we want to find goods to need some people help. We need to use English tell them about the goods information and character. Here two we need to use English outside of ESL class. This is very important.
11/10/09
Writing 2A
Using English Outside of Class
I have been studying English two years, but I don’t use it in outside of the ESL class. Now, I find we need to use it in life and it is very important. For example: we need to speak it in school any where. We do anything with America people only speak English can help us to easy finish working. We listening teacher’s question and think a little time and answer it in the school. Here is using English for any things. We go to shopping, if we want to find goods to need some people help. We need to use English tell them about the goods information and character. Here two we need to use English outside of ESL class. This is very important.
Tuesday, November 10, 2009
Yangyang
Yangyang
11/10/09
Writing 2A
When I was in China, except I go to school, I have an English class in the Saturday afternoon. In the English class, the teacher can speak English. She did speak English with us and gave us a lot of English practice to do because English classes in school have many questions that I didn’t understand. So I used weekend time to learn English. Sometimes we do listening practice and read the story in English. Sometimes she did practiced speaking with us and asked us some questions, and she can chat by speaking in English with us.
11/10/09
Writing 2A
When I was in China, except I go to school, I have an English class in the Saturday afternoon. In the English class, the teacher can speak English. She did speak English with us and gave us a lot of English practice to do because English classes in school have many questions that I didn’t understand. So I used weekend time to learn English. Sometimes we do listening practice and read the story in English. Sometimes she did practiced speaking with us and asked us some questions, and she can chat by speaking in English with us.
ESL Writing Homework
ESL Writing 2A
11/10/2009
Maxwell
English and live
I have been in America for two mouths. I think English is very important. We should not only use English at class, but also use it for living. For examples, At dorm ,I need to exchange ideas with RA.I have to speak in English to shop assistant to get my needs in Wal Mart. Listening to English is important too, if you want to live better, you should listen carefully when RAs are saying, We have a dorm meeting every Sunday, we need to know what is the dorm meeting say .After school I always do homework by myself ,I need to read the book to solve questions. Every book explains in English Also I read the rules on the wall. Before I go to bed, I usually read news in English to get more knowledge.
11/10/2009
Maxwell
English and live
I have been in America for two mouths. I think English is very important. We should not only use English at class, but also use it for living. For examples, At dorm ,I need to exchange ideas with RA.I have to speak in English to shop assistant to get my needs in Wal Mart. Listening to English is important too, if you want to live better, you should listen carefully when RAs are saying, We have a dorm meeting every Sunday, we need to know what is the dorm meeting say .After school I always do homework by myself ,I need to read the book to solve questions. Every book explains in English Also I read the rules on the wall. Before I go to bed, I usually read news in English to get more knowledge.
Nam-moon
101109
Lydia Jung
ESL writing
Nam-Moon is really amazing place . Nam-moon is castle that built long time ago. It's beautifully big. Also, around Nam-Moon, there are nicely many cloths , shoes and Korean street food shops . In Nam-Moon shops' clothes ,and shoes are cheap and pretty. Also there are many kind of foods selling ,such as mando, dduck bockkie , odanng, juice and ice cream. Street foods are cheap too. If you come to the Nam-Moon, you can enjoy korean clothes , foods ,and cultures in little money.
Lydia Jung
ESL writing
Nam-Moon is really amazing place . Nam-moon is castle that built long time ago. It's beautifully big. Also, around Nam-Moon, there are nicely many cloths , shoes and Korean street food shops . In Nam-Moon shops' clothes ,and shoes are cheap and pretty. Also there are many kind of foods selling ,such as mando, dduck bockkie , odanng, juice and ice cream. Street foods are cheap too. If you come to the Nam-Moon, you can enjoy korean clothes , foods ,and cultures in little money.
My Back pack
101109
Lydia Jung
ESL writing
My Back pack
There re many things in my school back pack , such as physical science book, geometry book, a file that for collect papers, a pencile case , my room key , a school diary, Gums , tooth brush , note books , Mp3 and electronic dictionary. The Books and the file are for classes in the school. The Gums and the tooth brush for after eat break fast and lunch. MP3 players for in the morning school bus. The dictionary for physical science and Religion classes. I think my back pack is too heavy but there are school stuffs that I need to bring to school so I bring all stuffs that in the bag to school every days.
Check your spelling
Do not use, "Staff" or "Thing"
Late due
Lydia Jung
ESL writing
My Back pack
There re many things in my school back pack , such as physical science book, geometry book, a file that for collect papers, a pencile case , my room key , a school diary, Gums , tooth brush , note books , Mp3 and electronic dictionary. The Books and the file are for classes in the school. The Gums and the tooth brush for after eat break fast and lunch. MP3 players for in the morning school bus. The dictionary for physical science and Religion classes. I think my back pack is too heavy but there are school stuffs that I need to bring to school so I bring all stuffs that in the bag to school every days.
Check your spelling
Do not use, "Staff" or "Thing"
Late due
Alan Bai.
Writing 2 A.
Alan Bai.
English
The English is a very popular language in the wrold. So so many people use it in their life. When I outide of class I always use the lanage in the boy dorm with leoard because he is different country for me. So we just can use English talk about someting. So I also listen to English at school and boy dorm in U.S. I usually read English book after I finish homework. So every day I have to use English at anywhere ,so I must make my English better.
Alan Bai.
English
The English is a very popular language in the wrold. So so many people use it in their life. When I outide of class I always use the lanage in the boy dorm with leoard because he is different country for me. So we just can use English talk about someting. So I also listen to English at school and boy dorm in U.S. I usually read English book after I finish homework. So every day I have to use English at anywhere ,so I must make my English better.
Post office
101109
Lydia Jung
ESL writing class
Post offfice
If I go to post office, I always see him. He always wear a red cap, a red shirt with white T-shirt and he has really kind smile. His skin color is brown and he is tall . He sits on front desk and he checks some mails . His hands are big and thick.
Lydia Jung
ESL writing class
Post offfice
If I go to post office, I always see him. He always wear a red cap, a red shirt with white T-shirt and he has really kind smile. His skin color is brown and he is tall . He sits on front desk and he checks some mails . His hands are big and thick.
kevin Tseng
writing2A
kevin Tseng
11/10/09
kevin Tseng
11/10/09
using English outside of class
I sometimes use English outside of class. In dorms, I sometimes do not know where the homework is, I will ask Leonard about it. Leonard and I are from different country. He is from Africa, I am from Taiwan, so we must use English to talk with each other. I not only can practice my English but also can know about him more. I sometimes talk and play with Edward with English. I think I can improve my conversation by talking to him. I hope I can use English anywhere, even at dorms. If I can do that, I will must make my English progress.
Venus Sun
Venus Sun
11/10/09
Writing2A
11/10/09
Writing2A
Speak English outside
I speak English with Lydia. For example, we are from different country. So we need to speak English. When I go to library with Lydia, we have read English book of story. We use English a lot. So we always speak it. If we don’t know how to say some word. We have explained to each other, and we can understand. Sometimes, I stay in home. I have listen radio and English songs. There are good for students to improve English. I am chatting with my friends on computer. I have type English for them. This is nice idea to think English. We can learn English quickly. If we do those things.
Good Place
David Lin
11/09/09
Writing 2A
Good place
Beijing is a very good place of China. Beijing is capital of China and there have long time history since about 2000 years ago. All city is a big museum. There are many place need to you slowly enjoy. For example: there have The Great Wall, Gugong museum, and biggest piazza. First The Great Wall is very long and it has passing many cities. Its history has about 2000 years and there is the Chinese first king used to many people made. That was very hardly finished it. Many people usually said: if you came to Beijing didn’t go to The Great Wall, you are not a hero. Gugong museum have about every Chinese kings and Beijing city history. There are many costliness history goods save inside. The biggest piazza is very important of Chinese people because the Chinese flag rises in here every day and that is grandeur and beautiful. Welcome to China, Welcome to Beijing.
11/09/09
Writing 2A
Good place
Beijing is a very good place of China. Beijing is capital of China and there have long time history since about 2000 years ago. All city is a big museum. There are many place need to you slowly enjoy. For example: there have The Great Wall, Gugong museum, and biggest piazza. First The Great Wall is very long and it has passing many cities. Its history has about 2000 years and there is the Chinese first king used to many people made. That was very hardly finished it. Many people usually said: if you came to Beijing didn’t go to The Great Wall, you are not a hero. Gugong museum have about every Chinese kings and Beijing city history. There are many costliness history goods save inside. The biggest piazza is very important of Chinese people because the Chinese flag rises in here every day and that is grandeur and beautiful. Welcome to China, Welcome to Beijing.
Monday, November 9, 2009
Edward Hur
Edward Hur
November 9, 2009
ESL Writing
Write about using English outside of class. Who do you talk to in English? When you listen to English or read it?
I always use the English outside of class. For example, when I go to the homeroom, classroom, and interesting soccer field I speak the English with Americans or Chinese in the school. I like to talk with American because if I will talk to them my English skills are better than now. They have to use the useful English because they use only one language. In addition, there are the most people use the English in hays.
November 9, 2009
ESL Writing
Write about using English outside of class. Who do you talk to in English? When you listen to English or read it?
I always use the English outside of class. For example, when I go to the homeroom, classroom, and interesting soccer field I speak the English with Americans or Chinese in the school. I like to talk with American because if I will talk to them my English skills are better than now. They have to use the useful English because they use only one language. In addition, there are the most people use the English in hays.
Journal
Raymundo Hernandez
11-09-09
Writing 2A
The Big City.
It´s a really nice place to visit,there are a stores really famous to buy some clothes.Also there are three commercial center where you can find anything, like different clothes,foods, you can do it several activities.There were many people who go over there to visit or shopping.You have to be carefully when you buy anything,because some things are too expensive.You can go to a concert in one of the commercial centers, but the organizers of the concert,they have a big rule to we need follow at any time. You need spoke quietly.It´s easily to get a ticket to the concert. The concert always was presented successfuly.
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