Edward Hur
November 15, 2009
ESL Writing
My room is usually dirty and messy because many Korean guys come to the room than eat the noodle. After eating they always order to me what clean the noodle and go away. I don’t like to clean so I usually only wash the table but it looks bad. Sometimes, I and Jay clean the room hardly but we have too many stuff in my room so we can’t clean all stuff. I think we need to remove some stuff. For example, the drink, paper, clothes, and book. It makes messy in my room.
Kevin advice
You should make them eat out because your room is small
You should eat in the cafeteria because it is convenient
You can go another room to eat because you don’t clean your room
You should clean the noodle because the smell of noodle is not good
You should always open the window because it makes smell good
Dear Kevin
Thank you for your advice. I agree with your advice because my room is so small and dirty. So I need to go cafeteria for eat the noodles. In addition, I think open the window idea is very good because it makes to remove the bad smell. But I can’t go another room because if I eat the noodle at other room, I have to clean that noodle. If I don’t clean they will order to me for clean
November 15, 2009
ESL Writing
My room is usually dirty and messy because many Korean guys come to the room than eat the noodle. After eating they always order to me what clean the noodle and go away. I don’t like to clean so I usually only wash the table but it looks bad. Sometimes, I and Jay clean the room hardly but we have too many stuff in my room so we can’t clean all stuff. I think we need to remove some stuff. For example, the drink, paper, clothes, and book. It makes messy in my room.
Kevin advice
You should make them eat out because your room is small
You should eat in the cafeteria because it is convenient
You can go another room to eat because you don’t clean your room
You should clean the noodle because the smell of noodle is not good
You should always open the window because it makes smell good
Dear Kevin
Thank you for your advice. I agree with your advice because my room is so small and dirty. So I need to go cafeteria for eat the noodles. In addition, I think open the window idea is very good because it makes to remove the bad smell. But I can’t go another room because if I eat the noodle at other room, I have to clean that noodle. If I don’t clean they will order to me for clean
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