David Lin
11/15/09
Writing 2A
My Bedroom
My bedroom usually is very dirty and messy because I don’t have time and I don’t want to clean my bedroom. I don’t change my sheet long time. So, my bed smell is very bad. I often put my clothes on my bed, I sleep with them. I always put my dirty clothes on the floor because I don’t wash them everyday. I work and eat in the table. So, have many homework, book, and food paper on the table. I always can see drink bottle on the table. My garbage always is smell bed and many foods or paper in there because I don’t change it longtime. I want clean my bad bedroom.
Maxwell Advice
You should change the sheet because it looks old and dirty.
You should wash your clothes because they are dirty and smell is bad.
You should put the dirty clothes away because they look confused.
You should recycle the paper because they are too many.
You should take out the garbage because it is full.
Dear Maxwell:
Thank you. You give me good advices. I agree your advices because my bedroom is very dirty and messy. So, I need to clean my bedroom and use your advices. They are good because they can settle my bedroom is bad questions. Thank you again, can you help me clean my bedroom in weekend?