Edward Hur

Edward Hur
November 13, 2009
ESL Writing


1. On Christmas day is the most important day for me because I stayed my house with family and grandparents last year. First, my family and I went to the grandparents for make special food. We ate lunch in the meat restaurant because my family is too many and that day is one of special day. After lunch, we came back to the grandparent’s house. Then we went to the church where near to my house because many events in the church.

2. New Year day is important day for me because I got the money from parents, grandparents, cousin, aunt, and other people. When I went to my aunt’s house I talked with them because it made me feeling happy and interesting. Then we went to the grave for the relations. At that place we did the deep bow and perform an ancestral sacrifice. The last time, we met the relations and parting.
3. My birthday is important day for me. The last birthday, my family and I went to the eating house for my birthday and then we ordered the various kind of food. For example, we ate meat, pulgogi, and roasted ribs. It was very delicious. After lunch we went to “Artist”. It is the cake shop. We joined that shop and then I chose chocolate cake. Next, we went to grandparent’s house. First, we sang the “happy birthday” song with my family. Then we divided the piece of chocolate cake and we ate it. Finally, we came back to my house. I think we spend the great day.