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Writing2A
11/15/09
Writing2A
11/15/09
My room
My room is small, but it is clean. Because I live in this on room with other people. We have clean room every Sunday. Every Sunday clean room, we can wash drizzly clothes, trash clean floor and desk. I can open the windows, so the air is fresh. I bought a laundry basket, Put dirty clothes on the inside. Because ties will make my room more orderly.
Advises
1. You should not clean your room because it looks like nobody live here.
2. You should put your clothes everywhere because it is nothing in room.
3. You should not trough your trash away because if you do it your room will be smelling.
4. You should not clean your room every day because it is quickly to make dirt.
5. You should not put your book on the desk because it can put in book anywhere.
My room is small, but it is clean. Because I live in this on room with other people. We have clean room every Sunday. Every Sunday clean room, we can wash drizzly clothes, trash clean floor and desk. I can open the windows, so the air is fresh. I bought a laundry basket, Put dirty clothes on the inside. Because ties will make my room more orderly.
Advises
1. You should not clean your room because it looks like nobody live here.
2. You should put your clothes everywhere because it is nothing in room.
3. You should not trough your trash away because if you do it your room will be smelling.
4. You should not clean your room every day because it is quickly to make dirt.
5. You should not put your book on the desk because it can put in book anywhere.
E-mail
Dear Venus,
Thank you for your adviceS. You tell me not clean my room because it looks like nobody live here. Put your clothes everywhere because it is nothing in room. Not clean your room everyday because it is quickly to make dirt. Not trough your trash away because if my do it my room will be smelling. Not put your book on the desk because it can out in book anywhere. Thank you for you tells me. But I like my room tidy you give me a proposal that I think will make my room upheavals. I don’t like.
Dear Venus,
Thank you for your adviceS. You tell me not clean my room because it looks like nobody live here. Put your clothes everywhere because it is nothing in room. Not clean your room everyday because it is quickly to make dirt. Not trough your trash away because if my do it my room will be smelling. Not put your book on the desk because it can out in book anywhere. Thank you for you tells me. But I like my room tidy you give me a proposal that I think will make my room upheavals. I don’t like.
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