Journal

Raymundo Hernandez

11-17-09

Writing

My Friend.

Players soccers.

We playing soccer at the team of our communnity. He was the best defense at the team of the school. He always playing with a different shoes in each foot. Sometimes we playing with another teams or schools. We was the best team together, nobody can stop us.

Jokes

He was saying the best jokes. He created to me to laugh much in the school. He learn all about jokes and then he saying to us. Sometimes the jokes was really bad and nobody understand that. But that was the best gift that he has.

Studying in the same school.

We walk every day together to the school.In the school he helped me and I helped him. We taked the lunch together and we talked about our classes. We studied to taked a test and was really good for us because if we have a cuestion about any class, and we helped one to the other.

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