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Lydia Jung

ESL writing
My Room

My room is massy because I don't like clean my room everyday. I clean my room once a week. Also, I bought Kimchi in wichita and I keep kimchi in my room so it is little bit smelly. I tried open the windows and spray air cleaner but it wasn't work. My bed is for two people but I don't have roomate so I brought down bed from second floor to the floor. It's really usefull. Nowdays I always doing homwork and study on floor bed because My desk is very massy so I don't use my desk. After I use something such as, dryer, pens, book, and some bottles, I put those things on my desk and drawer. I put my uniforms on my chairs so my room looks massy, but my room is not dirty. I rub up my room's floor once a weeck and I sweep off floor almost everyday.

Allen's advice to me

1) You need to clean your room twice a week.

2)If you want eat something, eat food out of your room.

3)Put your clothes in drawer after you changed clothes.

4)You should open the window and the door during the you eat something in your room.

5)Put your shose in drawer and chair.

Dear Allen

Thank you for advice . I agree with you and I did whole things what you adviced to me then my room is not massy. Also, I don't eat Kimchi in my room any more and it was works my room smells good now. Thank you Allen very much.