ESL Writing

Maxwell Wang
11/04/09
Writing2A

Nature’s gift –sun
Sun gives energy, light and warm to us, I really love the sun, and long time ago, I think I have seen the most beautiful things……
When I was 11 years old, and I lived in china, I followed my parents went to Huang Shan city. The city has a mountain, it is very famous and popular. This day, we got up early because my parents said:"the most beautiful thing is here “so we went to the mountain at 5:45 AM .When we arrived highest of the mountain, the sky was dark, we waited a moment, and the sun begun comes up. I saw the winds are pink, there were wild gooses through the wind. Sometimes the wind cover the half a sun. It’s really beautiful. I do understand what the most beautiful thing in the world is.
Three years have passed, my parents took me arrived the Ri Zhao city. The city is a sea town. There is the sea and big beach. My mother told me:"There is the most beautiful sunset “I think about three years ago, she also said "The most beautiful thing”. This day, after dinner, we went to the beach. We arrived there was a little late, but we can see the half a sun hide in the sea. The color of sun and wind like pink, but they were blood red. We can see the fished jump near the half a sun, I was very surprised, the same sun, the different scenery.
The sun comes up and comes down, both are beautiful, like life, we have to have a beginning and an end.